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Writing

（一）优化策略，系统训练

1.词、句、段、篇，循序渐进

1)全面掌握“考纲”词汇。

2)熟练运用基本句型。

3)连句成段，注意衔接。

4)学会模仿，谋局布篇：

文章开头：“开门见山”；

发展段：“枝繁叶茂”；

结论段：“画龙点睛”。

2.夯实基础，讲究技巧

1)加强基础知识的落实

2)提高“遣词造句、谋局布篇”的能力

3)掌握英语写作的基本要求和步骤 3.精讲精练，融会贯通

1)控制性写作（Controlled writing）

2)引导性写作（Guided writing）

3)自由写作（Free writing）

（二）议论性命题写话主要类型

1、“我认为……”型．

如“My view on fast food”（弊多利少）2.“一分为二….”型.如: “Exam”（利多弊少）

3、“二选一型”

如: “ Is it neceary for middle school students to own mobiles phones?”

4、“怎样……（how to）”型．

如:“How to keep fit ?”

5、“抒发感受”型

如:“0ur Junior School Life”

议论性命题写话解题思路

一、注意审题,阅读提示,理顺思路

认真阅读题目(英文以及中文);

仔细读懂 Suggested points

二、再四定:

定题材

定人称

定时态

定要点: 要表达自己的观点,看法 ,可以自己设置几个问题，或可列出一些关键词。

例1: Write at least 60 words about the topic: “My view on the Internet”.（以“我对网络的看法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯，标点符号不占格）：（共14分）

Suggested points:

• get information

• online service

• bad websites

• play computer games 设问: In your opinion, what good is the Internet? Why?

Send emails, get information, shopping online, chat online, relax myself(watch movies, listen to music, play games…)In your opinion, what bad is the Internet? Why?

bad websites, ……

You suggestions to use the Internet

三、紧扣要点, 遣词造句,思路清晰

1.开头：简单解释要讨论的问题，明白地亮出自己的观点

（A）直截了当开头法，提出自己鲜明的观点如：

1）Fast food is bad for people’s health.2）Exams are important to students, especially to Chinese students.3）I think it is unneceary for middle school students to own mobiles phones.(B)间接法开头，如：

4）Everyone wants to have a better life.So it is very important to keep healthy.归纳法：如：Our junior school life is both busy and enjoyable.触景生情法：如：It’s time for us to leave middle school.In the past few

years, I have learned a lot.2.主体段：

展开句能为主题句所服务

紧扣论点，句式、词汇有变化，学会用串联词、习语、谚语来等 如：发表观点

1)It is pleasant to go on a trip.2)I think it is neceary for students to take exams from time to time.3)In my opinion, students should wear school uniform because they look neat and tidy.再如：一种意思多种表达法

Reading is fun.Reading is enjoyable.Reading is a pleasure.Reading makes us happy.Reading offers us a lot of fun.We can get great fun by reading.(from books)

Reading provides not only knowledge but also fun for us.3.结论段：

1)可用一两句话来结束文章，注意与引言段呼应，避免照搬前面的原话．

2)画龙点睛，最好有提升（如对未来的展望、号召正确的做法等）

My View on Fast food

Fast food is very popular among young people.but it is bad for our health.So it is also called junk food.（表述社会现象及观点）.In fact, fast food is neither healthy nor cheap.We all know most kinds of fast food are deep fried.So they contain something bad.（阐述有害的原因可能导致的后果）

Although it is convenient and delicious to have fast food, people should try more green food instead of fast food.（提升主题-----号召人们多吃绿色食品）

Is it neceary for middle school students to own mobiles phones?

As a student, I think it’s unneceary for us to use a mobile phone.(陈述观点)

Students usually use mobile phones to send short meages and play games.They even do these in cla.It’s harmful to their studies.They also spend a lot of money in sending meages.The more usele meages they send, the more money they waste.（中学生使用手机的弊端）

So it is clear middle school students shouldn’t own mobiles phones.（强调观点）

My family life

My family life is both busy and interesting.(直截了当点题）Both of my parents are teachers.They are always busy with their work on weekdays.I also have a lot of homework to do every day.（围绕第一层意思----忙碌展开）

Of course, we can still do something interesting to relax ourselves.My father has the same hobby as I.We enjoy watching football matches at weekends.Sometimes, our family take a trip during the summer holidays.We have been to many famous places.（围绕第二层意思-----有趣展开）

I hope my family life will be more enjoyable.（提升题目---展望未来）

四、最重要的检查有四项：

1)查内容。检查要点是否缺漏，各要点是否有助于主题等。2)查词汇。检查名词的单复数是否正确，动词选择是否恰当，动词使用形式是否正确，动词短语和习惯是否正确等。3)查句型。查句式是否恰当，主谓是否一致，表达是否符合英

语习惯等。

4)查文采.谋篇润色,注意文采,再检查。

▲句子要有一定的变化

▲学会用串联词,注意句与句,段与段之间的过渡 5)书写端正。

（三）常用的衔接词

1、用于开篇引出：

nowadays ,It is adj.to do、I think2、有关“承”的常用词语.用来承接上文,表递进.also/too、besides、in addition、in fact、in other words、of course, more importantly3、有关“转”的常用词语.用来表示不同或相反.however ,though/although ,but, yet

4、用于总结的词语

generally, in a word，as you can see

（四）常用句型



1、表示现象



Nowadays, more and more people like to surf the net.

2、发表观点  1)It is pleasant to go on a trip. 2)I think it is neceary for students to take exams from time to time. 3)In my opinion, students should wear school uniform because they look neat and tidy.3、其他： 表示转折

1）Although we need recreation, we shouldn’t spend too much time relaxing.2)The internet is so useful, but we have to be careful with it when we surf the net because there are some unhealthy websites.3)Homework is really important to students, however, teachers should give us proper amount of homework.表示目的

1）In order to improve ourselves, we can read many different kinds of books ,which are

helpful to our study.2)We should study hard so that we can do something better for our city in the future.表示因果

1)As the entrance exam is coming, all the students are busy with their study.2)Almost all the students like math leons because Mr.Lei always makes his leons

interesting.3)Pollution has become a serious problem, so we teenagers should also try our best to fight against it.表示条件

1）If you want to learn English well, you have to practise it as much as poible.2)We can learn better if we have good study habits 表示结果

1)Football is such an interesting sport that most people enjoy it.2)Now we have got so much homework that almost everyone doesn’t go to bed until 11.表示和/不但…….而且

1)Reading is not only interesting but also helpful to us.2)Both study and recreation are important.3)Almost all the boys like taking part in sports as well as playing computer games.愿

望

1)I hope to get good marks in the following exam.2)I hope we can realize our dreams.3)My hope is to become a volunteer for the 2010 Expo.常用的谚语

 A friend in need is a friend indeed.(写朋友） All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.（写如何享受生活）

 Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.（养成生活好习惯）

 Where there is a will, there is a way.（写志向）

（五）写作注意事项

A.恰当地使用一些过渡性词语，会使得文章结构严密，增强说服力，感染力 1）递进：further more, moreover, besides, in addition, then.2）转折：however, but, neverthele, after all.3）总结：in a word，finally, at last, in brief, on the whole, as you can see 4）强调：really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all.5）对比：in the same way, just as, on one hand, on the other hand.6)并列：besides，in addition，what’s more，moreover 7)原因：because of，since, now that „

8）结果：thus，therefore，as a result„

9）列举：for example，that is to say„

10)顺序：first，secondly B.1)避免只是用一两个句式，要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。

2）使用长短句，通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

3）改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词短语等。

C.避免重复使用同一单词或词组。

D．注意运用固定词组、习语、谚语来代替一些词表达意思，以增加文采。

如： Knowledge is power.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.Never do things by halves.选择词汇：具体明确、适当得体、简捷精练、巧用连词

造句: 以正确为先、选常用词、写熟练句

写话：主题句清楚、支撑句丰富、结论句精辟。写话总体要求：

1）使用正确的时态

2）使用正确的词语

3）要有清晰的思路

4）要有不同的句子

5）要有一定的连接

（六）命题写话解题思路

一、注意审题,阅读提示,理顺思路,认真阅读题目(英文以及中文);仔细读懂 Suggested points

二、再四定 ：

定题材

定人称

定时态

定要点

三、紧扣要点, 遣词造句,思路清晰

四、最重要的检查有四项 点睛句

1.Life has its ups and downs, and only true friends stay around.Like anyone else, I have such a good friend.A good friend is the one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.2.We should have the determination to cut the wrist like the warriors.3.Every person does what they can, no matter how small it is, to give out positive energy.4.Love will always last if we love the whole fine things around us.5.She is beautiful both inside and outside.6.Keep working at it.One day you’ll see that you can turn over a new leaf and be a new one.7.When kids fall down, they don’t think of the fall as a failure.But they think of it as a learning experience/ proce.8.We should use our wisdom to make the right choice in face of every key point in our life.9.Love and support of each other can carry us through hard times.10.If life is a journey, friendship is a compa which leads me to a happy future.范文 倡议书

Dear clamates, I am a member of the “Friends of the Earth” Club.I am here to call on all of us to live a low carbon life.Global warming is becoming more and more serious.Everybody should try his best to solve the problem.Talking the talking is not as good as walking the walk.First, we can go to school by bus or by bike instead of by car.Second, nothing is more important than saving energy.We should turn off the light when we leave claroom.Always print on both sides of the paper.Stop using tiue paper and use a handkerchief instead.Just take action and join us!It’s easier to live a low carbon life than it seems to be.I’m a member of singing and dancing club Undoubtedly, various activities are of great importance.As far as I am concerned, being a member of singing and dancing clubs enriches my life and broadens my view.I sing and dance with my friend in this club.I do feel excited for the following reasons.Firstly, singing and dancing serve as a private escape from the heavy school life and satisfy my emotional needs.Additionally I have gained friendship in this club.It’s really a pricele treasure.To put everything in a shell, singing and dancing club is so fantastic that I’ve fallen in love with it.Try my best to help those in need Helping others means helping ourselves.So I will try my best to help those in need.In our daily lives, we may come acro so many difficulties that we can’t deal with by ourselves.So we need help to overcome these difficulties.Here are some little things you can do to help other people.If you see someone struggling to carry groceries, you can offer to help.If you see an old man standing in the bus, you can give a seat to him.Let's give help to others.I think the world will be much more beautiful if our hearts are all full of love.Sharing brings…

1.Do you often share something with others? 2.What do you usually share with others? 3.What does sharing bring you?

Learning to share is a proce to learn how to lead a happy life.I am used to sharing my secrets and favorite things with my friends in order to let my heart free and make me thoroughly forget sadne.When I am happy, I will share my smile with my friends, which brightens up all the faces around me.When I am sad, I will also share my sorrow with them.There seems to be a stream flowing in my heart, clearing up my pain.I gain happine which is from not only myself but also others by sharing.As the saying goes, “Sharing is a wonderful thing which can increase the pleasure and reduce sadne.” I believe sharing will be a resource of happine if I can insist on doing so.My clamates and my cla 1.How do you get along with your clamates?

2.What have you done with your clamates?(Give at least 2 examples)3.What do you think of your cla?

My cla is like a big family, the teachers act as the parents while we are the children.I’m a member of a harmonious family.Sometimes there is misunderstanding and arguments, but my cla is always full of love and care.On Teachers’ Day, all the students gave a surprise to our cla teacher with a beautiful painting together.On the sports meeting, we fought arm in arm and achieved great succe.All of these have shown that my cla is one team.We gather in one claroom, in one way, with one dream.Union is strength!We are not afraid of the challenges and difficulties ahead because my cla is united and strong.The importance of family In my opinion, family is very important.My parents always help me in my life and study.When my room is out of order, they help me to tidy it up and tell me the importance of keeping things in order.When I am down because of the marks, they comfort me and cheer me up, telling me to focus on the next exams.I think their advice is useful.And I’m happy to have such caring parents.Are you against or for owning a private car? In my point of view, it is not a wise decision to own a private car.First, as the price of fuel is going up at a fast pace, it is becoming more and more expensive to drive a private car.Second, more traffic jams will be caused if there are too many cars on the road.Third, more cars, more pollution.Since global warming is getting worse and worse day by day, all of us must take the responsibility to slow it down.Finally, some people think it cool to drive a name-brand car at a high speed on the road.But I think it is a silly way to play cool to tie your life to such an unreliable iron box with four wheels running crazily.Coolne means something, but safety means everything.It is also cool to say “No” to private cars, isn’t it?