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第六期书面表达讲评

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1.Opinions are divided on this questions.(祝美娜、张尹泽、谭述、徐媛、佟傲雪)

2.As far as I’m concerned, doing voluntary work is meaningful if we are capable of it, in which case it could ……(赵婷君)

3.In my opinion, one can always manage to do more things, no matter how full one’s schedule is in life.As a teenager, we can challenge ourselves by doing voluntary work.4.As far as I’m concerned, we may as well do some voluntary work to gain some useful experience which can not be learned from cla.(孟兰蕙)

5.More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering.(马晓宇)

6.Besides，no one can deny the fact that …..So we may as well make full use of time to do what we should do.In opinion, if time permits, it is good for us to do this.(王秋爽)

7.Those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.There is no better time than now.Don’t hesitate.Let’s join in it now.(高波)找瑕疵：

1.It is beneficial to build up the sence of responsibility.2.They think that they can help others, for whom life was hard ,in which case it can made our

society peaceful and made our country more stronger.3.I think do voluntary work is an excellent experience.4.Although there are some spare for us, but we have to do much home work.5.We should pay more attention on our study.6.I hope more people to join it and enjoy it.7.In my opinion, join in voluntary is very important.8.….make the society better and peacefully.9.Furthermore, the reason why they against it is that they have too much homework to do.10.Because we can learn something that give us the wisdom of life.