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初中英语作文批改范例

书面表达：

三年的初中生活即将结束，你要离开熟悉的同学和老师，要离开美丽的校园。在分别之际，你一定有许多话对亲爱的老师说。请敞开心扉，写出你想说的话。

内容要求如下：

1.感谢老师及理由。2.不辜负老师期望，未来计划。

3.词数80左右。4.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

学生作文范文：

Dear Mrs.Zhang,How time flies！Three years has paed since I entered this school.I have had three wonderful years

.During the three years, I got along well with my clamates.We lived and learned from each other.① I should say thanks to you and my clamates.Without your help, I can’t make so much progre.I want to be a doctor in the future.②

Yours,Wu Di

庙仙初中九（2）班： 谌萍 教师点评：

①It’s very clever of you to write your composition with this beautiful sentence that you have learned!

②Well done!How well you made the sentence!

Good!It’s excellent you haven't made any mistakes this time!You've done best of all in your cla, but try to make your handwriting nicer.You’d better use some short sentences to instead of the long ones.Do you think so?

I wish you succe in the coming examination.指导教师：姚荣军

工作单位：庙仙初中