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补充：投诉信（抱怨信）(Letter of Complaint)

第一部分：提出抱怨并表示遗憾 套语：

(1)很抱歉打扰您，但我必须郑重提出投诉。

I am sorry to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a serious complaint.(2)我很遗憾地告诉你投诉有关…….的事由。

I am sorry to tell you that there should be cause to complain about …(3)我真的很讨厌抱怨，但最近有一件事情确实令人烦心。

I really hate to complain, but one thing is really disturbing now.第二部分：阐述问题发生的经过 套语：无

第三部分：指出问题引起的后果 套语：

(1)噪音影响我的睡眠，使得我在上班时间无法集中精力。结果这些天我已经搞错了好几次

The noise disturbs my sleep so that I can’t concentrate on my work during the work time, and as a result, I have made several mistakes these days.(2)在这样（嘈杂）环境下我无法进行研究，我需要一间安静的房间。

For me this environment is very difficult to make studies and I need a quiet room.第四部分：提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措施

套语：

(1)我认为是你认识到……的时候了。

I think it’s high time that you realized ….(2)我们深知你们并不经常出错，但我们希望能确保这类差错不再发生。

We know that you are not generally carele, but we should like your aurance that this will not happen again.(3)我必须正告贵方，除非对目前状况采取措施，否则我将被迫诉诸法律。

I must warn you that unle you do something about the situation, I will be forced to take legal action.(4)坦率地所，我不再准备忍受这种状况。

Frankly, I am not prepared to put up with the situation any more.(5)如果您能尽快调查此事，我将不胜感激。期待您尽快回复。

I would be very grateful if you could look into the matter as soon as poible.And I am looking forward to an early reply.范文示例：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Library Service on Campus.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你是李强，请你就本校图书馆的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及图书馆的藏书数量和更新状况、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。【审题】本文可以从批评着手，成为一封批评信。题目要求中规定了要涉及藏书、环境等内容，为作文提供了一些思路。同时注意，虽然是封批评信，但也要做到客观，不能把图书馆说得一无是处。

【写作思路】

第一段：

介绍写信的目的。

第二段到第四段：从三方面说明图书馆存在的问题

第五段：

指出图书馆给我们的帮助很大，但急需改进

第六段：

结束语

【范文及点评】

A Letter to the University President about the Library Service on Campus.January 6th, 2006 Dear Mr.President, I am writing to expre my concern over the

(1)开门见山，点明写信缘由 Library service on the campus.As a major in English, I find that most of the

(2)提出第一个问题，藏书没有 Books in English in the library are outdated.So far,及时更新 I have not come acro a single book published after 1995.As a result, we fail to get the latest information(3)指出后果，不能及时得到 of academic development both at home and abroad.最新信息

In addition, the light in the reading room is far

(4)指出光线不好

from bright, which does harm to our eyes.Worse still,(5)指出没有空调的问题, Wrose there is no air-conditioning and we are sweating heavily

still 意思是“更糟糕的是” while reading.Last but not least, the newly developed electronic

(6)提出最后一个问题 information system does not work well and needs further improvement.A great number of books should have been listed in the system.There is no denying that the library has helped us a(7)客观说明图书馆的作用 lot.But it is in urgent need of improvement.When im-

(8)对图书馆的改进充满 proved, the library is certain to provide much more help

期待 with our study.Thank you for your time.I am looking forward to

(9)结束语，期待对方的回信 your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Qiang 请柬（Invitation）

所谓正式社交书信是使用于隆重的社交活动的信件，亦即请柬，如在教堂中举行婚礼的请柬、大型宴会的请柬、舞会请柬等。［）请柬是邀请亲友的书面通知，措辞要恰当，并有一定的格式。正式请柬要用优质白色的双摺卡。正面用雕版精印。卡纸可用平面的。请柬和复函都用第三人称来写。格式用美观而不规则的缩行形式排列在一页内。姓名要全部写出来。时间如星期几、日期、月份和地点均须写明。正式请柬亦可手写，但整个页面的安排须完全仿照印刷请柬的形式。晚宴、舞会等请柬用“request the pleasure(or honor)of your company”来邀请。在教堂结婚，邀请出席婚礼用“request the honor of your presence”，中文的意思是“敬请出席”或“恭请光临”

一、正式请柬 1． 晚宴

Mr.and Mrs.Oliver Barrett III request the pleasure of your company at a dinner in celebration of Mr.Barrett’s sixtieth birthday Saturday, the sixth of March at seven o’clock Dover House ,Ipswich, Maachusetts

R.S.V.P.[译文]

兹订于三月六日（星期六）晚7时在马萨诸塞州伊普斯威奇镇 多佛宅邸设宴庆贺巴雷特先生60岁寿辰，恭请届时光临。奥利佛·巴雷特第三夫妇敬上 请赐回示接到正式请柬后应尽可能在24小时内予以答复。如果不能赴宴，须明确说明原因，以便女主人可以有时间另作安排。下面是一份接受波特先生和夫人请柬的复 2.招待会请柬

You are cordially invited to a buffet reception to be held at the Shanghai Banquet Hall, 1333 Nanjing West Road, on Tuesday, November.6, 2005, at 6:30 p.m., to celebrate the occasion of the Shanghai Workshop on International Investment.Cyrus R.Vance for the International Delegation 3． 婚礼请柬

Mr.and Mrs.Thomas Lang request the honor of your presence at the marriage of their daughter Jane to Mr.George Smith on Saturday, the first of October at five o’clock St.Peter’s Church

Oxford and to the reception afterwards at the Royal Hotel 76 The Parks, Oxford R.S.V.P.[译文]

为庆祝上海国际投资法研讨会胜利召开，谨定于2005年11月6日（星期二）晚6时半 在南京西路1333号上海宴会厅举行招待会。()敬请光临。

国际代表团 塞勒斯·R·万斯敬上

[译文]

兹订于十月一日（星期六）下午五时 在牛津圣彼得大教堂

为小女珍妮与乔治?史密斯先生举行结婚典礼，并在牛津帕克斯76号皇家饭店设喜宴，恭请光临。托马斯?兰先生和夫人谨订

敬请赐复发言稿（演讲稿）

1、格式

发言稿一般由称呼语、正文和结束语三部分组成.发言稿的开头和结尾一般有固定的格式.dear friends，I am very glad to introduce myself to you……that’s all.thank you.dear friends，Today I am very glad to be here to share with you my ideas of…… That’s all.thank you for listening。

如果面对的是熟悉的听众，开头和结尾也可以活泼些、灵活些 Good morning /Good afternoon, everyone…...That’s all.Thank you.Good evening!Ladies and gentlemen……That’s all.Thank you.Hi, everyone, It is so nice to see all of you here……That’s all.Thank you for listening.2.正文

发言稿正文常分为三部分：

第一部分：开门见山地提出本人要谈的问题及对问题的看法

第二部分：说明理由。常用到的连接成分有：first of all, secondly, finally等等。

第三部分：照应开头，总结全文。可以对全文作简明扼要的总结，也可以谈自己的感想、看法或期望。常用到的句式有：In short…,In a word, I think, I expect等

因为高考试题在命题形式上侧重于考查发言稿正文的写法。所以写正文时要注意以下三点：

观点要鲜明。对问题持有什看法，要明确表态，不要含糊其辞。要中心明确，重点突出，但不必面面俱到。

条理要清晰。一篇发言稿要谈几方面的问题，每一方面有那些要点要进行阐述，都要安排得有条有理，让人听起来容易抓住重点。

适当增加关联词和细节。发言稿开头于结尾已经给出。那么在命题形式上侧重于考查发言稿正文的写法，所以我们在根据要点组织正文内容时，可以适当增加关联词和细节，以使短文连贯、完整。

语言要简洁明快，发言时因为要直接面对听众，所以发言稿的特定形式决定了其语言的口语性强，因此应少用复杂句，多用简单句。话说的要准确、易懂，最好运用大众语言。所以我们在组织句子时要注意“三多一少”即简单句式多，祈使句多、情态动词多，修饰性词语少。但文中的句型也要善于变化，不要过于单一。

罗列观点的句型:

my personal opinions on … are as follows.here are my personal opinions on …

I’ll tell you my personal opinions on…

有关英语学习策略的句型:

each of us is dreaming of a practical way to…

…is of great benefit to us.I’m fond of doing

征求意见的句型:

would you please offer me some practical advice?

thank you for your good advice.could you give me some practical advice?

范文一：

ladies and gentlemen , good afternoon!I'm very glad to stand here and give you a short speech.today my topic is “youth”。Ihope you will like it , and found the importance in your youth so that more cherish it.First, I want to ask you some questions:

1、Do you know what is youth?

2、How do you master your youth?

Youth

Youth is not a time of life, it is a state of mind;it is not rosy cheeks , red lips and supple knees, it is a matter of the emotions : it is the freshne;it is the freshne of the deep springs of life.Youth means a temperamental predominance of courage over timidity of the appetite , for adventure over the love of ease.This often exists in a man of 60 more than a boy of 20.Nobody grows old merely by a number of years.We grow old by deserting our ideals.Years wrinkle the skin , but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul.worry , fear , self –distrust bows the heart and turns the spirit back to dust.Whether 60 of 16 , there is in every human being 's heart the lure of wonders, the unfailing childlike appetite of what's next and the joy of the game of living.In the center of your heart and my heart there's a wirele station : so long as it receives meages of beauty , hope ,cheer, courage and power from men and from the infinite, so long as you are young.When the aerials are down , and your spirit is covered with snows of cynicism and the ice of peimism, then you are grown old ,even at 20 , but as long as your aerials are up ,to catch waves of optimism , there is hope you may die young at 80.Thank you!