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写作的模版已经给出，所以应试写作就变得比较容易。但是，形式有了，还要注意以下两个方面：1）语言上尽量少出错 2）内容（观点）要有说服力

1.errors in last composition(上次作文中的语言错误)2.Improper content of last composition 学生分析例文，总结出文章的outline

Dieting More and more people, especially female, are beginning to go on diet.Some people are concerned with their health, so they begin to go on diet in order to lose unwanted weight.But some others, especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance.They become the leading members who go on diet.Dieting is of great benefit to the over-weighted people.First, being over-weigh is bad for one’s health because it leads to heart disease, breath-le, hypertension()high blood preure), etc.second, being over-weight brings about so much inconvenience to the life of the over-weighted people and dieting enables them to enjoy life more.As a coin has two sides, dieting also has some side effects.For one thing, many people diet not because they really want to live a healthy life, but because they do it out of vanity.In this way, the will suffer from malnutrition.For another, dieters lead a miserable life because they always feel hungry and, at the same time, they have to go through the misery of watching others enjoy their three meals a day.In a word, people should diet for a healthy body not for only for a slim figure.3.Distinction between argumentation and explanation Ss compare the two types 1)Title;No More Video Games Outline: 1.应该取消电子游戏

2.取消电子游戏的原因

3.我的看法 1)Title: Video Games Outline: 1.有些人认为不应该取消电子游戏

2.有些人则认为应该取消电子游戏

3.我的看法

2)Title: Is Diploma Everything? Outline;1.现在社会上有一股文凭热

2.文凭热产生的原因

3.我对文凭的看法

2)Title: Is Diploma Everything? Outline: 1.有些人认为没有文凭再有能力也找不到工作

2.有些人认为文凭不是全部

3.我的观点

3)Title: Private Schools in China Outline;1.私立学校的现状

2.私立学校受欢迎的原因

3.我对私立学校的看法 3)Title: Private Schools in China Outline: 1.私立学校在我国的现状

2.私立学校给我们的教育带来的好处

3.私立学校可能带来的副作用 4）Title: Dieting Outline: 1.越来越多的人，尤其是女性开始减肥

2.为什么人们要减肥

3.应该怎样减肥 4）Title: Dieting Outline: 1.越来越多的人，尤其是女性开始减肥

2.减肥有许多好处

3.盲目减肥会产生一些副作用

二者区别：explanation: 1）观点已确立 2）outline 是关键

Argumentation: 1)有两种观点 或自己的观点与别人的不同，需要argue 一下 说明利弊（说明文）不等于 对比利弊（议论文）4.Writing pattern—explanation

I Ss 分析以下outline，看explanation包括那些类型 1.Title: No Pains, No Gains Outline: 1.怎样理解“不劳无获”这一格言

2.学习中的体会

3.结论

2.Title: Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way Outline: 1.怎样理解“有志者事竟成”

2.例如，在学习中…

3.结论

3.Title: Man Proposes, God Disposes Outline: 1.如何理解“谋事在人，成事在天”

2.试举例说明

4.Title: Is Diploma Everything? Outline: 1.现在社会上由一股文凭热

2.文凭热产生的原因

3.我对文凭的看法

5.Title: Importance of Developing Listening Ability Outline: 1.有些学生在学外语时不注意培养听力能力

2.事实上，听力是外语学习的一个重要方面(为什么)

3.结论

6.Title: Are Electronic Dictionaries Good? Outline: 1.很多学生使用电子词典

2.使用电子词典的缺点

3.我的看法

7.Title: Students’ Preference for Famous Brands Outline: 1.学生中出现了穿着讲究品牌的现象

2.这些学生为什么要追求穿名牌

3.我的观点

8.Title: Fight Against Piracy Outline: 1.盗版现象日益猖狂

2.盗版的危害

3.我们应该坚决抵制盗版 9.Title: The Value of Modesty Outline: 1.谦虚使人进步

2.我对谦虚这一美德的看法（即：谦虚的价值是什么）10.Title: Blood Donation without Repayment Outline: 1.我国无偿献血的现状

2.无偿献血的意义

3.献血与健康的关系

11.The Importance of Self-confidence Outline: 1.自信心的重要性

2.缺乏自信的原因

3.如何培养自信心 12.Title: road Accidents Outline: 1.道路事故造成的损失

2.降低事故的方法

3.我的看法 13.Title: Air Pollution Outline: 1.大气污染是现代社会的主要问题之一

2.科学家正在寻找防止大气污染的方法（即：如何防止大气污染）

3.结论

14.Title: Save the Wild Animals Outline: 1.许多野生动物正面临着绝种的危险

2.为了保护野生动物，必须采取措施（即：如何保护野生动物）

3.只有采取有力的措施，才能保护野生动物

T总结：

1）what 类：1-3 解释谚语或一句话 2）how 类；12-14如何解决某项问题

3）why类：4-11解释（列举）reasons（4、5、7、11）, disadvantages(6), significance(10), bad effects(8)

II what 类：1-3 解释谚语或一句话 a.学生分析1-3 得出概括的outline b.老师给出概括的outline c.Outline: 1.如何理解…这句名言

2.分析并结合现实生活中的例子使其充实

3.结论 d.writing pattern: 学生读下面的文章，总结模版

Practice Makes Perfect There is a widespread saying, “practice makes perfect”.It means that doing things repeatedly is the only way to become very good at it.A case in point is the study of English.If you are to improve your pronunciation, you must practice every sound again and again.If you want to write an excellent composition, you have to practice a lot.Other examples can also be found to prove this.If practice is not sufficiently, you can’t expect a chef to cook a delicious dish, a mechanic to fix a car, and an acrobat to perform on a rope.It is practice that leads to perfection.I like the saying practice makes perfect, which encourage me to make myself perfect by repeated practice.模版：

There is a widespread saying,(1)“____________”.It means that(2)______________.A case in point is(3)______________.(4)______________.Other examples/another example can also be found to prove this.(5)_________________

I like the saying(6)____, which encourage me to make myself(7)____.(1)谚语或格言

(2)谚语或格言的意思(3)第一个例子名称

(4)对第一个例子进行进一步解释(5)列举其他例子(6)重复该谚语

(7)该谚语或名言对我起到的作用

e.practice:

Title: Man Proposes, God Disposes Outline: 1.如何理解“谋事在人，成事在天”

2.试举例说明

Man proposes, god disposes, which means that the planning lies with man, the outcome with Heaven.