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Is Money Everything？作文

At present some people in our country think that money is everything.They say that you can do everything if you have money.You can live in a beautiful house，keep a luxurious（豪华的）car and have all sorts of delicious（可口的）food.I don't think so.Indeed，money can buy a lot of things we need.But there are many，many wonderful things in the world [that]（1）cannot be bought with money.For example，knowledge cannot be bought with money.One cannot be rich in knowledge unle he studies hard.Friendship cannot be bought，either.There's a famous saying “A friend in need is a friend indeed”。A story is told about a man.When he was rich，many people wanted to be his friends.When he became poor，all of his friends left him.[，whom many people wanted to make friends with when he was rich，but all of them left him when he became poor.]（2）So you see，money cannot buy real friendship.Money can buy a gold watch，but who can buy even a second of time with money？ One cannot turn the wheel of time backwards.Time must be seized.Who keeps a more active life，who gets more time.[ He who keeps a more active life gets more time.]（3）

There are still many other things [that]（4）cannot be boughtwith money： health，life，happine，love and so on.Just think，if a person hasn't these things at all，is his money still useful？

Now，do you still（5）think money is everything？

评 语

本文对“金钱万能”的思想进行了有力的反驳，举例论理相结合，具有一定的说服力。同时语言运用简洁明快，文中某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下：

（1）、（4）句子谓语是 There are，“cannot be bought„”是“There be”句型主语 many wonderful/other things 的定语从句的谓语，故要加上关系代词 that.（2）这里最好把后面句子改为修饰前面句子 A story is told about a man中a man的定语从句，否则，a man会被误解为“任何一个人”。

（3）原句为中国式英语：“谁„„，谁就„„”，故改之。

（5）still用得太主观，好像you已经有这样的看法了，因此删去为好。