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高分作文标志
1：四级120-150字；六级150-180字； 2是否长短句交叉；
3用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I（比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.）以04年6月6级作文结尾为例:
It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge代替enhance one's competitivene（提高某物竞争力）
以下面作文为例
Computer and I I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in
goggling
an
army
of useful information I had expected and enjoy a sea of melodious claic music.That night I was sleeple, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witneed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure The dawn of the new century witneed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with … 非常地道的词汇，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into Current(currently)替换 now
Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说 “某事是毫不夸张的”
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides deliver 替换 send There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the diervice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the diervice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the diervice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 代替 appearing(fading 代替 disappearing)Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a claic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换
a part of Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)
Facet 替换 aspect
以下是近30个最经典的替换词
1.individuals, characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
2.positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be le impreive代替
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many, if not most)代替many.注意：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many
后一定要有词。Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all, 代替most 5.a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some 6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think
7.affair ,busine ,matter 代替thing 8.shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 代替get much benefit）
10.for my part ,from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion
11.Increasing(ly),growing 代替more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.)Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing代替hardly 13.beneficial 代替helpful 14.shopper, client, consumer, purchaser, 代替customer 15.exceedingly, extremely 代替very 16.hardly unneceary, hardly inevitable...代替 neceary 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替sb take interest in 18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.19.facet, dimension, sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 代替..reasons for sth 23.desire 代替want.24.pour attention into 代替pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 代替remember 26.enjoy, poe 代替have(注意proce是过程的意思)27.interaction代替communication 28.frown on sth代替 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example代替 for example
