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Schools are no longer neceary because children can get so much information on the internet.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

首段： 介绍话题+表态： disagree 介绍话题： 改写题目：换词+换句式

The importance of traditional education has been dampened since internet provide a vast number of courses for students.To my way of thinking, i am not in favor of this opinion(To my way of thinking, schools cannot be replaced by internet).主体段1： disagree： schools are neceary 中心句：本段的目标（本段论点）：schools are neceary 论据+论证 论据+论证

The advantages of schools are obvious.Firstly, there are plenty of interaction between clamates at schools.In other words, students can help each other in life and learning, exchange ideas and attitudes and have competition.This is because schools offer an environment where they can stay together.Therefore they can cultivate confidence and learn to communicate in this atmosphere.Besides, schools offer various outdoor activities like sports meeting, camping, chorus, etc and advanced facilities such as teaching building, reading rooms, sports courts and so on, which contributes to the all-round development on morality, intelligence and physical quality.For example, they can learn how to apply theory into practice, maintain healthy, foster different hobbies like singing, dancing, learn to organize activities, etc.主体段2： agree： internet......中心句 论据+论证 反驳

Admittedly, it is also worth mentioning the positive sides of studying on the internet.One of them is that children can obtain abundant resources in wider range as information can be shared all over the country and even the world.For example, if one wants to learn oral english, he or she can find teachers from abroad who have native pronunciation and better expreion.However, despite this, much of the information on the internet is usele, so it is a waste of time and difficult to find suitable leons.Compared with this, the knowledge at schools are strictly selected by educational institutes and experts which are naturally fit for them.尾段： 重申

Based on the discuion above, we can find that although there are some benefits in distance education, the position of schools cannot be swayed for the time being.