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1995年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happine?
You should write no le than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happine)
2.也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil)
3.我的看法
[范文]Can Money Buy Happine?
Can money buy happine? Various people have various answers.Some people think that money is the source of happine.With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys.With money, one can do whatever he likes.So, in their minds, money can bring comfort, security, and so on.Money, as they think, is the source of happine.But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil.Money drives people to steal, to rob, and to break the law.A lot of people became criminals just 测量学 试卷
第 1 页（共 10页）because they were in search of money.And in the Western countries, there is nothing that can’t be bought by money.Many people lose their own lives when hunting it.I think that money is eential to life and we cannot do without money.But even though money is neceary to life, it can’t buy happine.Happine is not something that can be measured by money.It is a state of mind.One can have plenty of money, with which he can buy whatever he wants, and at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of problems.Therefore, although money is neceary for a happy life, it can’t buy happine.1996年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Two-day Weekend.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.双休日给大学生带来的好处。
2.双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。
3.我应当怎样过好双休日。
[范文]The Two-day Weekend
The two-day weekend has brought a lot of benefits to college students.It not only offers us more time to get rid of tiredne and have a good rest, but also gives us more chances to take up some hobbies, such as fishing, reading, or gardening.From these activities we can learn many things outside the claroom, which will add to our knowledge.测量学 试卷
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Despite the convenience it brings us, the two-day weekend has also given rise to quite a few problems.The most serious one is that the weekdays are filled with more leon, sometimes too many.Because our claes are limited to Monday through Friday, we have to take more leons each day than in the past.This leaves us little time to catch our breath during the weekdays.In order to benefit most from the two-day weekend, I have decided to make a good plan for the two-day weekend.Of course I should take this chance to relax.But during the weekend, I will still set aside enough time to study.By doing so ii can have a good time as well as make progre in my studies.1997年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes tow rite a composition on the topic Practice Makes Perfect.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”?
2.例如：在英语学习中......3.又如......[范文]Practice Makes Perfect
The famous saying “Practice makes perfect” is widely accepted today.It means if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, we’ll be able to perform it perfectly.The practice of learning English is a good example.We are not living in an English speaking country.So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners.Only sitting at the desk cannot lead to the mastery of English.测量学 试卷
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As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it.Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday.On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers.Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.1998年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Harmfulne of Fake Commodities.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?
2.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。
[范文]Harmfulne of Fake Commodities
In recent years, a lot of fake commodities have appeared in the market.These fake commodities have done great harm to the consumers and the society.Since the policy of reform was implemented, China’s economy has improved.A lot of people getting richer, and their living conditions are getting better.But still some of them are not satisfied.They dream of getting rich overnight and living a heavenly life, which, of course, is impoible to achieve by fair means.So they risk breaking the law to produce the market take commodities.Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do immeasurable harm to the society.The direct victims are the consumers.As the quality of the fake commodities is always very poor, the consumers may suffer great loes.Certain fake commodities, such as food and medicine, will cause irreparable harm to the health and well-being of 测量学 试卷
第 4 页（共 10页）the consumers.Fake commodities also cut into the profits of the brand-name-owners.Since the fake ones are cheaper, people tend to be reluctant to buy the genuine ones.1998年6月大学英语四级和六级(相同)作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes towrite acomposition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your compositi on the outline(given in Chinese)below.1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。
2.我认为数字和运气无关，......[范文]Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?
Some people take it for granted that some lucky numbers can bring them good luck.For instance, the so-called lucky number “8” is widely used now because it is sounded like “getting rich” in Chinese and is believed to bring good fortune.Yet many others don’t think so.They think that numbers have nothing to do with luck.They regard numbers simply as a mathematic symbols for counting.They are anything but a mystery.They laugh at those who think numbers can bring good luck.I’m in favor of the latter opinion.I think our society is very modern now.We mustn’t count on the so-called lucky numbers to fulfill our wishes.Whether we can have good luck depends on ourselves.If we work hard, good luck will come to us.1996年6月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Global Shortage of Fresh Water.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 测量学 试卷
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1.人们以为淡水是取之不尽的(提示：雨水、河水、井水......)
2.实际上淡水是非常紧缺的(提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染......)
3.我们应该怎么办
[范文]Global Shortage of Fresh Water
Many people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore, with the rapid growth of the world’s population, the rising demand for water by industry, and the serious pollution of our surroundings, the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually, in some big cities, fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore, to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First, we should pa strict laws to control any waste of water.Second, scientists must work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water, and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.1999年1月大学英语四级和六级(相同)作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Don‟t Hesitate to Say “No”.You should write at least 100-160 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说“不”
2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
3.该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处
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[范文]Don‟t Hesitate to Say “No”
In our daily life, there are many occasions on which we should not hesitate to refuse when asked for help.For one thing, when it is beyond our ability, we should give a direct reply “no”.For another, we the thing we are asked for is unreasonable or even illegal, we should say “no” without hesitation.However, it is not the case in our real life.Many people prefer to say “yes” when they should say “no”.Some are afraid to lose their face, since they think refusal means their inability.Some people are afraid to offend their acquaintances‟ face, such as their friends, relatives and so on.In fact, doing so is quite harmful.If you agree to do the things beyond your ability, the result will only be worse.The other might as well have asked another person who can help.And if you agree to do the unreasonable or even the illegal favors, such as cheating in the exam, you are in fact not helping the other but hurting him.You yourself will get into trouble too.1999年6月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively Or Extensively? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.有人认为读书要有选择
2.有人认为应当博览群书
3.我的看法
[范文]Reading Selectively Or Extensively? 测量学 试卷
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Some people think when we read we should read selectively.That is to say, we should select some books we are interested in and ignore the others.Reading selectively can help us concentrate our limited time and attention on those selected books.Others think we should read extensively.No matter what kind of book it is, we should look it over.We should read various kinds of books, whether we are interested in them or not.They maintain that reading extensively can help to enlarge our view and grasp the general knowledge in different fields.In my opinion, the two reading ways have their roles respectively in our reading.However, the disadvantages of each methods are easy to see.If we only read the books we select or prefer, the framework of our knowledge may not be complete.Our knowledge would be rather limited.And if we read without selection, we may not have so much time and energy to be specialized in one particular field.Therefore, the combination of the two methods is more reasonable.2000年1月大学英语四级、六级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education.You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多种途径解决
2.哪种途径适合于我(说明理由)
[范文]How I Finance My College Education
Several years ago new tuition fee policy was put into practice and college students were asked to pay a certain sum of money.And now, all the students, no matter what subjects they are engaged in, must pay for tuition.测量学 试卷
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There are many ways for a student to finance his college education.Most students ask their parents to pay the tuition fee and pay for their books, accommodation and other cost.A student can also apply for the scholarship.Most universities set up scholarship to offer money to the poor students who do well in entrance exams and reward those who do well in entrance exams and reward those who work well at university.A student can also apply for the low-interest loans.In addition to the above, taking part-time jobs is also a common way for a college student to get money to pay part of his tuition and fees.So far as I‟m concerned, I‟d prefer earning the scholarship.This means I must study hard and be a top student, which has always been my goal.After all, the task of a student is to study.And in addition to solving my financial problems, getting the scholarship can also prove my ability and is good for my future.2001年1月大学英语四级、六级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1.面试在求职过程中的作用
2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是......[范文]How to Succeed in a Job Interview?
Nowadays, in an ever tighter job market, great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant.The interview, so to speak, has become indispensable for getting a satisfactory job.On the one hand, the interviewer can take advantage of the occasion to learn about the candidates, such as their work experiences, education and their personalities, so as to pick out the right person for the company.On the other hand, the interviewee can make use 测量学 试卷
第 9 页（共 10页）of the opportunity to get to know the job he is going to take up, the salary, the working conditions and many other things about the job he is interested in.Therefore, the job interview is very important to a job-hunter.But how can one succeed in it? Firstly of all, the interviewee must pay attention to his or her appearance.The first impreion is always where we start.Get dreed properly and neatly.Secondly, good manners are equally important.Don‟t be too proud, and neither too timid.Just be courteous.Thirdly, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about eh job-related areas.Be confident.Last but not the least, the interviewee ought to be honest about his or her personal as well as academic background, for honesty is the best policy.To sum up, the job interview is indeed important, but there is no need to be nervous.As long as the interviewee has the ability for the job, with careful preparation and a fairly confident and honest performance, his or her succe can be ensured.2001年6月大学英语四级、六级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write a t least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1.表示欢迎
2.提出对度假安排的建议
3.提醒应注意的事项
[范文]A letter to a Schoolmate
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Dear Xiao Wang,I‟m delighted to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long vacation.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I‟m sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you are fond of swimming.A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there.I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days.In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner.We can watch TV, play CDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain about two miles away from here is beautiful and it is worth touring.We can go there on foot.When we climb to the top of the mountain, we can have a wonderful bird-eye view of the whole village.Just phone me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.I‟ll prepare everything for you.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Zhang Ying
2002年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼有而有之。[参考范文] 测量学 试卷
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January 12th, 2002
Dear Mr.President,I‟m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I‟m afraid I‟m not content with the canteen service on campus.Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved.Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year round, they are the same.More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day.So I think the most urgent problem is variety.Secondly, the price is a bit too high.Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food.Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can‟t enjoy our meals in good mood.I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax.These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of may other students.We hope our respectable president will pay attention to our suggestions.By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling.So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service.Best wishes,Li Ming Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:
1.上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间: 1990年(2 hours)、1995年(4 hours)、2002年(14 hours)，请描述其变化;测量学 试卷
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2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明);
3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。[参考范文]Student Use of Computers
Students tend to use computers more and more nowadays.Reading this chart, we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply.In 1990, it was le than 2 hours;and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours;while in 2000, the number soared to 20 hours.Obviously computers are becoming more and more popular.There are several reasons for this.First, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life.Also, the fast development of the Internet enlarges our demands for using computers.We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Internet.Besides, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enables more students to purchase them.Along with the time spent on computers, there arise some problems.The most serious one is that many students are spending so much time playing PC games so that they ignore their studies.It is urgent to let the students use computers in a proper way.2003年1月大学英语四级、六级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 100 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象
2.诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实
[范文]It Pays to Be Honest 测量学 试卷
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Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society.For example, some businemen sell fake product to their consumers;some students cheat in the exams.Dishonest people are short-sighted.Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won‟t buy their products any more.As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison.By contrast, honest people gain a lot.Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well.Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends.Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job.Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest.So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor.So it is important that we should be honest.2003年6月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
[要求]假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：
1、车祸发生的时间及地点
2、你所见到的车祸情况
3、你对车祸原因的分析
[参考范文]An Eye-Witne Account of a Traffic Accident
My name is Liming.I am studying at college.A week ago I saw a traffic accident , which is still vivid in my mind.测量学 试卷
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It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university.I was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard a loud crash of two vehicles just at the T-junction about 10 meters away.Two taxis crashed together.It was a traffic accident.I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged.Both hoofs were out of shape.One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road.One driver was blooding and another was shut in the taxi.Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car.One man was calling to the traffic policeman station.A lot of cars were jammed on the road.From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast.But it is just one of the reasons.In my opinion, the taxi drivers are eager to take more paengers and make a little more money.On the other hand, both drivers don‟t show concern for one another.Both of them wanted to run in front of another.Therefore, the accident is inevitable.So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer.Taking care of other‟s lives means taking care of your own life.2003年9月英语四级作文及其范文
Part Ⅴ Writing(30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Clamate Fell Ill(or Got Injured).You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病(或受伤)的情况
2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……
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During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003, one of my clamates, Li ming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital.The news spread quickly on campus.At first, we were terrified and wondered if we were infected too.However, through our government's publicity on ma media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try out best to help her.Some teachers provided darly neceities while some students recorded the English cla contents for him so that Li ming could not be left behind.With our care and concern, Li ming recovered quickly.Such an incident teaches us a good moral.Our society is full of love, warm and peaceful, in which people-from man to woman, from individual to individual-lend others a hand.Just like a famous song goes, “the world will turn it to heaven only if everyone contributes a little.” and I do believe that it's my great honor to live in this love-filled paradise!2004年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
1.建议报考的专业及理由
2.报考该专业的基本条件
3.应当如何备考
[参考范文]A Letter in Reply to a Friend
December 27, 2003
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第 16 页（共 10页）in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on.What‟s more, it goes without saying that English majors are more likely to find a good job in the tighter and tighter job market.In order to study at English Department, you have to meet the following requirements.In the first place, you have to spend a lot of time on it, just as the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”.In the second place, the basic skills of reading, writing, listening and speaking are neceary, because they are the foundations for your future study.Last but not the least important, you need an intense interest in learning English since “interest is the best teacher.”
As far as the preparation work is concerned, you should first of all review all the required vocabulary.In addition, you‟d better spend some time on reading and writing.Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in our university.Yours,Li Ming
2004年6月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include:
● some welcoming words
● the schedule for the day
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● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)
You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.[参考范文] a tour guide
Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing.To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it‟s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”，I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China.The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago.In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall.Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states.By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts.From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers.It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。
Above is my introduction to the Great Wall.If any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.2005年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文
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[范文]A Campaign Speech
Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students„ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my cla.I have done a very good job for my clamates, and my clamates and my tacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some siutable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.2005年6月18日英语四级作文及范文
Teacher‟s Day ：
1.向老师致以节日的问候。
2.回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。
3.我如何报答老师。
[参考范文之一]
This is Teachers‟ Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers.This profeion deserves the special recognition and respect.There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field.You have my eternal gratefulne.Have a happy Teachers‟ Day.测量学 试卷
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The whole secret of the teacher‟s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth;for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life.What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soule.My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher.On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me.What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view.On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you.One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.[参考范文之二]
National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May.And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I had no idea about about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine ang smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our buliding.Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she aslo told me that‟s very common like many yong people of my age.She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just can‟t remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!
Another teacher‟s day,to all the teachers,to our parents.[参考范文之三]
The Once per year ‟s Teacher‟s Day will come soon.At first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my teacher.测量学 试卷
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Last week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the school.My teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a hurry.After checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute enteritis.My teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after me.My teacher fed me food and medicine on time.After struggling with the serious illne in one days and one nights, I left hospital.Then my teacher helps me to make up a mied leon of English in a few days in succeion.I expre gratitude to my teacher, I can‟t recover so fast without my teacher.Because of my teacher I can participate today‟s CETD.I want to repay my teacher.No present can expre my grateful feeling to my teacher.And the best repayment is that I can pa the CETD this time.2005年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文你认为自己具备是什么条件(能力，性格，爱好)可以胜任学生会主席工作，如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么?
[范文]A Campaign Speech
Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students„ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my cla.I have done a very good job for my clamates, and my clamates and my tacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some siutable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.2005年6月18日英语四级作文及范文
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Teacher‟s Day ：
1.向老师致以节日的问候。
2.回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。
3.我如何报答老师。[参考范文之一]
This is Teachers‟ Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers.This profeion deserves the special recognition and respect.There is no more appropriate time than this to honour you and others in your chosen field.You have my eternal gratefulne.Have a happy Teachers‟ Day.The whole secret of the teacher‟s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth;for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life.What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soule.My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher.On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me.What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view.On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you.One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.[参考范文之二]
National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May.And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I had no idea about about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine 测量学 试卷
第 22 页（共 10页）ang smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our buliding.Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she aslo told me that‟s very common like many yong people of my age.She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just can‟t remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!
Another teacher‟s day,to all the teachers,to our parents.[参考范文之三]
The Once per year ‟s Teacher‟s Day will come soon.At first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my teacher.Last week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the school.My teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a hurry.After checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute enteritis.My teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after me.My teacher fed me food and medicine on time.After struggling with the serious illne in one days and one nights, I left hospital.Then my teacher helps me to make up a mied leon of English in a few days in succeion.I expre gratitude to my teacher, I can‟t recover so fast without my teacher.Because of my teacher I can participate today‟s CETD.I want to repay my teacher.No present can expre my grateful feeling to my teacher.And the best repayment is that I can pa the CETD this time.2007年6月英语四级作文及范文
欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部。
标题：Welcome to our club 测量学 试卷
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本文要求考生写一篇欢迎辞，属于一篇应用文写作，与04年6月的导游词类似，笔者认为难度不大，可按照以下提纲书写：
1.表达你的欢迎；
2.对你们的俱乐部作一个简要介绍。
[参考范文]
范文一：
Ladies and Gentlemen，First of all, please allow me to expre the most heartfelt welcome to all of you on behalf of our English Club.We have been looking forward to seeing you for long.It is a wonderful day today.Now I would like to brief my club to you since I want to leave the most wonderful for you to discover.Our club, organizing various activities regularly catering for the needs of participants, is well-known among many English learners.If you want to meet native English speakers, please join us.If you want to speak English not only accurately but also fluently, please join us.If you want to discover the most attractive aspects in English, please join us.I do hope that you will enjoy your journey of English study with us.Thank you!
Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
范文二：
Welcome to English Club!It could serve as a platform to show your outstanding abilities and help you develop a range of great skills.测量学 试卷
第 24 页（共 10页）You can be involved in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas, holding group discuions and watching Oscar-winning movies.These extra-curricular activities could offer you ample opportunities.First, your active participation is helpful to strengthening the sense of responsibility and managing interpersonal relations.Second, various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English.A good command of English empowers you to enjoy decided competitive edge over your peers.You can file a written application to our staff office or email us via bonoo@diandian.net.The deadline for entries is Sept.25th.Come on, join us now!
范文三：
Welcome to Our Club
June 23, 2007 The Speech Club is organizing school-wide speech training and contests to be held on each Saturday at the Students‟Recreational Center.Five prestigious experts and profeors will be invited to be speech lecturers and contest judges.For each speech contest, the first six winners will be given awards.Attending our club has substantial advantages.Firstly, it can improve your ability to deliver a speech which is of utmost significance to your future career and development.Secondly, it can help you to poe self-confidence, enrich your extra curricula activities and make your campus life dimensional, colorful and vigorous.To sum up, the experiences in our club will be extraordinarily unforgettable throughout your life.Students who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their claes before Tuesday next week(June 26).Everybody is welcome to attend our club.2007年12月英语四级作文及范文
测量学 试卷
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1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课
2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课
3、以你自己为例……
[参考范文]
范文一
Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose from.However, students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own ideas.Some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation.Because they aume that some more knowledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good job.Others may have their choice made just for fun.They tend to hold the idea that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective courses.As far as I‟m concerned, I‟m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own.范文二
Nowadays many college students prefer to have electives in their spare time because the courses can offer a variety of skills and abundant knowledge apart from what they learn in the daily courses.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, many students want to get another degree besides their own, so that they can have more competence when they seek a job.Furthermore, as for me, I don‟t care about degree 测量学 试卷
第 26 页（共 10页）or job, I just want to obtain some neceary skills to make my college life worthwhile.What I‟m concerned most is how to own more skills that may be neceary for my future.Finally, some students want to learn anything that is different from what they are learning now.The science students, for example, want to know about Shakespeare while the art students want to tell how a vehicle works and how to deal with it when it breaks down.So, they can all get what they think is useful to their college life.On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of multi-demand of the employment market.There is still a long way for us to improve the elective itself, but as a student myself, I find it rewarding and interesting.范文三
What Electives To Choose
With the reform of Chinese higher education, more and more colleges and universities put emphasis on nurturing students‟ abilities.As a result, elective courses are available not only for excellent academic performers but also for students about the average level.Certainly, students have different reasons to choose their own electives.For some, practical skills are the eence of college education, and therefore, courses on computer science, marketing, and finance are highly preferred.On the other hand, others may hold the idea of liberal education and electives concerning literature, history, and philosophy are the most welcome.Take me as an example: being a disciple of free education, I stand for the notion that university is not a place for survival skills, but a palace of knowledge and critical reasoning.Although my major is chemistry, the electives I attend most frequently are English literature, an Introduction to Claic Music, and Different Schools of Western Painting.They really widen my horizon.测量学 试卷
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Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags
1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用
2.造成的问题
3.限制使用塑的意义
[参考范文]
• Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags
• These days disposal products often hit the headlines of newspapers and have been brought into focus of the public.Indeed, it is widely accepted that they have gained increasing popularity among people in all walks of life.Taking a look around you, you can find examples too numerous to list: When you walk on the street, you can see plastic bags flying over your head;When you ramble along the river, you can find plastic bottles floating on the water;When you stroll in the park with your lover, you can notice waste paper thrown everywhere.• Among the most important reasons often cited by people is the quickening pace of modern life.They are often too busy to wash dirty dishes or glaes, as a result they can do nothing but use disposal products.Also playing a part is the improvement of people's life.As a result of the policy of opening and reform, an increasing number of people are much richer than before and can afford disposal products.(原因)
• Admittedly, they might benefit us in a short term.Unfortunately, they will do us harm in more than one way.The major harm is(that)they are sure to pollute the environment.To make matters worse, they are likely to have potential harm to public health.To illustrate this point, I can think of no better example than HP, the river through S.As a result of disposal products in it, the water has caused some diseases in the local people.(影响)测量学 试卷
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• To sum up, for the factors mentioned before, we can safely reach the conclusion that the prevalence of disposale products is bound to cause a chain of undesirable effects.In view of the present situation, it is high time that the government tried every means to protect the environment.Only in this way, can we have a bright future.2009年6月英语四级作文及范文
Free admiion to museums
越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?
也会带来一些问题
你的看法
[参考范文]
Free Admiion to Museums(满分版)
Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are admiion-free to visitors home and abroad.The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as there‟s a growing awarene for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society.Only with free acce to this live „database‟, can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.However, free admiion to museums might lead to some social problems as well.The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly impedes the sustainable development of these organizations.As a result, our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control.On the other hand, free admiion attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.测量学 试卷
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As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admiion conduct.Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it.For example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some „closed‟ days for museums for regular maintenance.Only in this way can free-admiion to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development.2009年12月大学英语四级真题作文范文及点评
题目：Create a green campus 1.建设绿色校园十分重要 2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境
3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该„„
新东方版范文(一)
It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college.Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable.Some of the authorities' budget should be on how to reduce of the waste.What's more, we'd better be aware of the seriousne of pollution around us.Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life.It is neceary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.(字数：167)
点评：本次作文还是延续四级一贯成熟的风格，偏重校园生活。当然也结合了时下流行的话题，绿色环保。上面这篇文章尽管有些不妥当之处，但能较好的符合四级考试作文的核心：无论题目怎么变，都是以考察学生的语言为核心，不是考查思维和知识面的。所以只需关注语言的应用就行了。还是可以灵活套用固定的套路，中心句＋逻辑词的方式，做到不变应万变。相信大多数同学应该能够习惯的应用新路老方法走的思路。但是，还是这句话，无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。
新东方版范文(二)
In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus.We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use;food is 测量学 试卷
第 30 页（共 10页）wasted just because of its poor taste;clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion.As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus.There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus.On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account.On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and profeionals at various levels.Accordingly, it is neceary for us to take effective steps.For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on.For another, we should enhance the awarene of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves.恩波版范文 范文：
Create a Green Campus
“Green campus” is, to some extent, a relatively new concept to us.It not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind.Of course, this concept is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world.The young generation is under the burden of severe environmental problems and the hopes of environmental improvement are lying in them.Therefore, campus plays a more important role in educating the young generation.The creation of “Green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities;most importantly, students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own miion and responsibility.Under such stimulations, students may grasp the chance to learn every neceary course for the harmonious and sustainable development of the world.To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.First, based on its education function, campus should bring the theory of “sustainable development” into clarooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities.Second, campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society, tries to communicate with parents and experts so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities.Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings.恩波版真题作文点评
此次的作文题目出的相对生僻，因为大多数考生对于“绿色校园”这个概念不大熟悉，这可能是最大的障碍，给考生着手写作文带来一定的困难。尽管“绿色校园”概念相对生僻，但此题中寓含的另一个概念“环境”却不可忽视，因此，考生应当从环境问题着手，着重点放在校园在“环境保护”中所起的重要作用，这样问题就能够迎刃而解。
首先要理清概念。“绿色校园”不仅指校园的绿色环境，“绿色学校”是指学校在实现其基本测量学 试卷
第 31 页（共 10页）教育功能的基础上，将以可持续发展理论为导向，在全面的日常工作中将可持续发展思想纳入管理中，通过制订环境管理制度，开展有效的环境教育活动，创设环境保护的文化氛围，促进师生、家长和专家参与环保和可持续发展的实际行动，全面提高师生的环境素养，共同为社会的可持续发展做出贡献。从概念就能看出“绿色校园”的重要性。
其次要弄清“绿色校园”的重要性。“绿色校园”不仅仅是带领学生参与各种环境保护活动，更重要的是教育学生，使学生具有环境意识，从而使学生从自己意识的角度来理解当前的环境问题，为未来的环境改善打下坚实的基础。
最后就是要采取的措施。要很好地建设“绿色校园”光靠学校自身是不够的，这需要全体社会的动员与支持。只有在整个社会的共同努力下，“绿色校园”才能充分发挥其作用。从学校的角度来讲，学校应当在学校全面的日常管理工作中纳入有益于环境的管理措施，并持续不断地改进，充分利用学校内外的一切资源和机会全面提高师生环境素养的学校；鼓励师生的民主公平地共同参与学校环境教育活动，加强学校与社区的合作和联系，在实践参与的过程中发展面向可持续发展的基本知识、技能、态度、情感、价值观和道德行为，即提高全体教职员工和学生的环境素养，落实环保行动。从总体写作来看，这篇作文总的可以分为三段：
第一段：着重写“绿色校园”的概念，从其概念引出“绿色校园”的重要地位。
第二段：此段的重点就是“绿色校园”的重要性，它能够促进学生们积极地参与到实际的环境问题中去，而且还能树立学生们的环境保护意识，对社会做出重大的贡献。
第三段：鉴于“绿色校园”的重要性，我们应当采取什么措施来建设“绿色校园”，把“绿色校园”的作用发挥到最大。
文都版范文 范文：
I am the part of the Green Campus
The Olympic Games was hold in our country last year.“Green and Environment-protecting ” is one of the Three Themes of it.Our government has made a great effort in order to protect the environment, build more green project to keep the ecological balance, push the recycling economy, and protects the water resource.As a university student, we should play an active role in the actions aimed at the realization of green and environment-protecting home and.We will start it from ourselves, our clamates, our friends and other people around us.We can stop cars running through our campus streets.And in the bathrooms, we will never leave the water running on after using.We will never throw things everywhere without thinking, They are wrong.These things are taking place everyday everywhere in our school.So, let's begin to act!Don't talk loudly in public places.Turn off the water tap after using it.After washing the clothes, use it to flash the toilet.Go to school by bike or by bus instead of by private car.Save your pocket money and contribute to environmental protection organizations.Collect waste paper or bottles for recycling.Plant more trees and flowers.We can start from every little thing around us to truly realize the green campus.Publicize the theme of green and environment-protecting, and let us really reach the “Green and 测量学 试卷
第 32 页（共 10页）Environment-protecting” goal in our generation.This is the responsibility of everyone who loves life and peace.文都版真题作文点评 作文是绿色校园的问题，包括在文都我们每一次对作文从三个角度去做预测，一个是结构，一个是主题，一个是它的材料，进行一个预测，但是这一次我总结有点对不起我的学生，因为这次尽管结构，首先第一个就是我们的绿色校园的重要性;第二是绿色不仅仅是环境的问题，也是列举的问题，除了环境以外还有什么别的方法，第三是怎么去做，其实这个结构老师在预测的过程中预测到了，但是主题坦白地说这一次徐可风没有预测中，还好后面的材料那块，我是给了学生五个材料，其中有一个怎么哥本哈根的会议闹得很凶的，气候跟绿色那是可以接上轨的，这次听过我的课的学生在重要性上可以来这么一句话，如果说哥本哈根会议是很重要的的话，那么建设绿色校园也必然很重要，有了这么一句就跟时实有一个结合，这就是个亮点，怎么说找亮点这就是亮点，所以上结构上我们是预测中，在主题上没有预测中，但是在材料上怎么说吧也中了(笑)。
写作这一块大概是这么个情况，但是我现在很担心一个问题，同学们在考场上的时候思路打不开，我一直很担心这个问题，尽管知道一个结构但是思路打不开，现在我们就结合我们这次写作的讲得细一点。第一个关于重要性这块，我觉得我们在思路说可以不可以去联系一些我们在校园里看到的能够跟绿色环保扯得上关系的一些现象，大家是不是可以看到校园里面的湖、池塘飘的可口可乐、康师傅的塑料瓶，这些是不是体现出一种对环境一种很污染，这肯定是不绿色，我们每次晚上看到校园里面的教学楼灯光很辉煌，一看是不是很多学生都在自习啊，是不是很多学生在很认真地学习呢，到了教室一只鬼都没有，就是开着灯光，这就浪费了一种电，是不是也是不绿色的体现，我发现有一些尤其是男孩子，他们我不知道他们洗一双袜子用多少水，但是我感觉他洗一双袜子的水够我洗个洗澡，这是不是也是一种浪费，对资源的不重视，就是不绿色的行为，其实这些我们都可以结合身边的校园的事情去表达，一下子你的思路就打开了。关于第二点绿色不仅仅是指环境的问题，我们可以再想想绿色还包括什么呢?刚刚除了提到的一些浪费的问问题，再想想，是不是包括刚刚考完试的同学有没有作弊过呢，这作弊是不是不诚实的问题，从道德的角度来说也是个不健康的，只要不健康的我们都可以把它称为不绿色，这些也可以结合去谈，是道德上的东西，还有有一次我突然想起来有一次我去检查宿舍，到宿舍里面去看进一个男生的宿舍，进之前我在走廊上听男生一直在发出一些感叹声，我进去一看一大批男孩子围着一个电脑不知道看什么，我进去说，我说你们在看什么内容，他们一看到我立刻就闪开了，感觉脸色有点不太好意思，我走过去看看电脑屏幕一看什么都没有。我当时想为什么我一来大家就全部闪开了吗，他们说是普通网页，徐老师也曾经年轻过，不要骗我，他们在上网看什么很清楚，这是不是也是不绿色的东西，东西这些除了环境以外，我们的道德，我们的上网，包括我们说话的习惯，我们说话的很多的学生尤其是男同学说话很有个性的，动不动就是一些国骂，其实在英文里面有一个词专门叫F words,那个单词我们不用说出来了，这种是不是是一个语言上的不绿色的表现，所以我觉得这里第二段的内容会写得内容非常非常多，敢于展开你的思路。
第三段是怎么去做，才能够比较的绿色，对绿色校园应该怎么去做，对于这一块我们首先可以地点从环境上保护环境，第二从节约上，节约电力，节水。
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2010年6月大学英语四级作文真题及满分范文
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，2.出现这种现象的原因是„
3.为了改变这种状况，我认为„.满分范文：
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
Nowadays, students attach le importance to the spelling of words in the proce of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers.There are poibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay le attention to spelling.Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.测量学 试卷
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Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it.As for me, I think, first, exams should be modified to add some factors into it, which would help students pay more attention to spelling.Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance.Finally, for students themselves, they can, through other ways, make them be interested in word spelling.Only by these can we surly realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.2010年12月大学英语四级考试真题 Part I Writing(30 minutes)Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该„„
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent
Nowadays, there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon, that is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children, including study, work, marriage.Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy children‟s independence thoroughly.For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent.The fundamental one is to cultivate the awarene, namely, the importance and neceity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood.Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had better act as a tutor, not a dictator.And only with parents‟ trust, can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.今年的作文主题非常贴近考生的生活，给了考生很大的发挥空间，擅长写日常生活细节的学生可以写上三五个句子勾勒父母对于子女的过度关爱，而擅长逻辑思考的学生则可以更多地阐述父母怎样的行为才可以培养子女独立的品格，而过度宠爱正导致了独立精神的消失。
从具体操作的角度来说，对于基础较为薄弱的考生，这次的考试题目是比较容易套用模板的，第一段，把现实状况描述清楚；第二段，写清楚父母亲帮助子女独立的策略；第三段，呼吁父母亲多给自己一些自由。怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
沪江考前模板专题里面关于解决问题类作文提到了类似的结构：
In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more 测量学 试卷
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Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I‟m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).像这样子的模板能够帮助无话可说，或者说英语表达能力比较弱的同学迅速找到思路，只需要填入关键的字词就可以完成作文。
但是对于能够用流畅的英语表达自己的思路的同学来说，写作如果希望取得比较高的分数，则需要注意语言必须尽可能简洁才能够在规定字数以内说清楚自己的论点，而句子的表达要求，也从有话可说，上升到言之有理，甚至上升到语言精致优美，内在逻辑严密的高度了。
在我们给出大家的这篇范文里面，三段文字结构清晰，语言简明优美又没有落入模板的窠臼，属于在临场作文中的优秀之作。
2011年6月大学英语四级真题
Part I Writing(30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay on the topic of Online Shopping.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3．我的建议
Online Shopping
标准版
Doing Shopping Online With the development of the Internet, shopping is no longer a tiring thing.Just click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is done.You don't even have to step out of the room.It seems all easy and quick.However, people's opinions vary on this trend.Some believe that on line shopping is time and money saving.With plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time convenient.Still others insist that mis-purchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their accounts.In my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all doubts.In the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, 测量学 试卷
第 36 页（共 10页）so we'd better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before buying.In addition, we should also guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account information.文章点评：
这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇；接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比；最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，用语较为地道。
下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处：
1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。但是，以“With the development of the Internet”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。
2.微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如With plentiful selection options„ 简化成With plentiful selections„ 更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多。
高分版
With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time.Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home.For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds.They don't have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However, there are still some defects in online shopping.First, lace of face to face deal makes online shopping le reliable and trustworthy.Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.点评：
本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。
按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题；
第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点；关于优点，网购的优测量学 试卷
第 37 页（共 10页）点很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间；网购可以节省很多成本开支等；其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面；为了不至于跟优点相比，缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣；
第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。
整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会他是难题。
外教版
Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets.Also, it's convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house.However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience.Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job.On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: gueing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating.For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool.But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing.点评：
作者在第一段描述了网购作为一种时尚给大家的生活带来了便利，然后话锋一转，说网购仍然取代不了面对面的购物交流。
第二段主要还是从正反两方面分析了网购的优势和不足，以此描述大家对网购的不同反应。
第三段作者表明了自己的观点，对网购的便利和不足之处都做了描述。
综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，结构清晰，语言表达地道，有不少闪光词汇，但是，内容深度上来讲还有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表达个人观点，和第二段稍有重复。考生需要注意观点的清晰，不宜模棱两可。
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