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2009年9月13日
评分标准:
2分-条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错,且多数为严重错误; 5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误; 8分-基本切题。有些地方表达不够清楚,文字勉强连贯。语言错误较多,其中有少量的严重错误。 11分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但是少量语言错误。 14分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错误。
注:英语作文一般不少于三段,分开头部分,扩展部分,结尾部分。
开头部分
按作文题目的不同大约可以分为六种:一般性作文(或要性作文),正反作文,引经据典式作文(或名人名言作文),题目为疑问句的作文,图表作文,应用文。
第一种:一般性作文(或要性作文)格式:引子(引出主题)+谦语+论点+启下
以Reading widely为例
引子:Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the _______(especially on __________),which is ___________.例如:Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.谦语;as far as I know, as far as I am concerned,in my opinion,from my viewpoint
论点:________have positive effects on___*__, 例如:reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, 启下:以上*号处,which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下:
Reading widely
Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.from my viewpoint
reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, which results from the reansons as follows.注意:以后在各种问题中,引子,谦语,启下,都不变。
第二种:正反作文
格式:引子(引出主题)+谦语+观点+启下
以Private car为例
引子:As an old aying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.谦语: from my viewpoint 1 private car have both advantage and 观点:○shortcoming on our daily life,private car have both positive and ○negative effects on our daily life,启下: which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下:
Private car As an old aying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.from my viewpoint, private car have both positive and negative effects on our daily life, which results from the reansons as follows.第三种:引经据典式作文(或名人名言作文)格式:引子+It means+解释(转述)+启下
以No pains,no gains为例
引子:No pains,no gains(抄题),which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.解释:It means your succe,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , 启下:which results from the reansons as follows.从而可得整篇开头如下:
No pains,no gains No pains,no gains,which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.It means your succe,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , which results from the reansons as follows.第四种:题目为疑问句的作文
可分为一般疑问句,选择疑问句,特殊疑问句 一
题目为一般疑问句 ○格式:引子+抄题+简短回答+谦词+转述(立论)+启下
简短回答:of course+主语+助动词 Of course not It all depends 以Should students be abroad studying at the
younger age ?为例
Nowadays,there exists an increasing heated discuion in matters of middle school students’ studying abroad.Then should they be abroad studying at the younger age ? It all depends.From my viewpoint,studying abroad for middle school students has both positive and negtaive effects on their future,which results from the reasons as follows.二 题目为选择疑问句 ○格式:引子+抄题(一定要补全)+简短回答+谦语+转述+启下
简短回答:I prefer to former to later
或It all denpends
以Reading selectively or widely ?为例 Nowadays,there existsan increasingly heated discuion in matters of the content of reading,especially for college students.Then should we read reading selectively or widely ? I prefer to latter.From my viewpiont,reading widely serves as an indispensable part to our study,which results from the reasons as follows.三 题目为特殊疑问句 ○格式:引子(传统)+抄题+回答(立论)+启下
以What could we do for the 2008 olympics?为例
Nowadays,2008 olympic games to be held in Beijing has become a hot topic among the Chinese home and abroad.Then as a college student,what could we do for her ? From my viewpoint,doing what we could from slight detail is of great importance, which results from the reasons as follows.第五种:图表作文
格式:引子+现象结论+描图+论点
引子:An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,*******************.现象结论:*号处。可用词changed dramatically.描图:对图表进行整体大致描述。例如:图表略。
{An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,}引子。{the number of computers owned by every 1000 people has changed dramatically in the past 20 years.}`现象结论。{In 1987,only 3%。of the people can work or play on computers ;While the number soared to 80% in 2007.}描图。{From my viewpoint,computers are being more and more widely used in our daily work and life.}论点。
第六种:应用文
应用文包括感谢信,投诉信,求职信 开头:I’m writing the letter to: 1 apply for position in your company.○2 1.complain ○about the bad quality of the goods I bought the other day.2.complain about the bad service I received.3 expre my heart-felt gratitude to sb ○for sth.扩展部分
一般性作文都可用以下格式:first and foremost,………
○2 what is more,………
○3the last but not the least important,………
○对于两面作文:on the one hand ……… On the other hand………
结尾部分
结尾的写法大致可以分为四种:印证主题式,呼吁社 会式,正反对照式,名人名言式。可以根据自己的题 材选择适当的结尾方式。第一种:印证主题式
格式:After pondering this iue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that_______________.以part-time jobs为例
After pondering this iue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that part-time jobs for college students have both positive and negative effects on their study and future.Inconsequence,we should have a correct attitude to when confronted with it.第二种:呼吁社会式
格式: In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________.Only in this way ,we can _________in the future.以Private car为例
In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of private car.Only in this way ,we can enjoy life in the future.第三种:正反对照式
格式:In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we _______________,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.以Private car为例
In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we want to have a private car,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.第四种:名人名言式结尾
格式:Whatever you do,please remember the saying____________.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.以No pains no gains为例
Whatever you do,please remember the saying no pains no gains.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.