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2013年12月四级写作真题解析之“手机过度使用”

(2013-12-15 11:47:54)

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2013年四级作文解析 分类： 四六级写作

这篇与本人考前所给备考冲刺作文不只神似，语言大部分可以直接使用。不知道你是否看过它：http://blog.sina.com.cn/

真题如下：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay based on the picture above.You should start your eay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people’s life and then explain the consequence of overusing it.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.(图片来源：网络；题目中英文内容：People are croing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see)解析：

传统的作文归类方式，如观点对比、问题解决或按图画、图表或名言警句类划分的方式正逐渐退出历史舞台。相反，按照题目要求写相应的“功能段落”和表达是答题的永恒方式，永远不会因为出题方式的改变而失效。

显然，试题未要求考生给作文命题，更没有要求考生抄写题目，所以不写题目丝毫不影响成绩。题目写对了当然也不会加分，但题目写错了得分必受影响。

本篇作文体裁明确，话题清晰，内容要求具体，即：简要解释手机的过度使用并分析其可能产生的后果。

可以看出，题目明确要求写的“现象”、“危害”，此外可写的是“建议”。

首段：图画解释描述（改写）

Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: a host of people are croing the street;to our great shock, they focus all their eyesight on cell phones rather than the road, and in order to see, they rely on their walking sticks.Such a picture can be naturally aociated with people’s overuse of mobile phones: if we intend to enjoy a harmonious and safe life, it is advisable for us to reject negative impacts of cell phones.In contemporary society, it has become a trend for people to purchase, own and use cell phones in daily life.Meanwhile, an increasing of individuals find that mobiles phones are overused.Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like scene in the picture: students concentrate on cell phones in cla;youngsters concentrate on cell phones in family.It is overuse of cell phones that enables us to ignore people around us and even to put us in danger.As a matter fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the negative impacts of cell phones.As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great neceity for us to refuse to be the slave of cell phones.Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, clamates and acquaintances to spend more time communicating with others face to face.Do bear in mind: cell phones are just our tool.(总字数：232词，可以将中间段砍掉开头两句或尾段砍掉最后两句)思路简析： 首段图画描述，改写图片提示信息即可。

二段首句点明主题并对主题简评，二句概述图片所指现象，三句相关人感受，四句排法举例，五句万能表达（强调句式）指出其危害，六句总结。

尾段首句表述自己观点，二句提出号召建议，尾句展望未来。

2013年12月作文解析之“网络对教育的影响”(2013-12-16 16:48:02)转载▼标签： 2013年四级作文解析 分类： 四六级写作

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay based on the picture below.You should start your eay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education does not simply mean learning to obtain information.（图片来源：网络；图片中文字信息：“Once I learn how to use Google, isn’t that all the education I really need?”）

简析：

今年试题英文部分的内容比较诡异，细看题目确实未要求描述图片信息，而是要求“作文基于图片信息，且以解释‘网络对教育的影响开篇，阐述为什么教育不仅仅意味着学会如何获取信息。”

功能段落解析范文：

This picture can be naturally aociated with the impact of Internet on learning: the young guy exprees his understanding/ conception / perception of education, “Once I learn how to use Google, isn’t that all the education I really need?” Obviously, in the youngster’s eyes, education equals getting information.In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of people to surf the Internet for diverse information.Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it rather convenient, comfortable and efficient to gain knowledge or information they need.Taking a look around, we can notice a great many students and their favorite websites: Google, Baidu and Yahoo.However, it is Internet that does not enable some learners to build up their correct perception of education.A case in point is the boy in the picture.As a college student, I am convinced that education means not only obtaining information, but also acquiring other important qualities, like scientific methods, optimistic attitudes for life, a strong will and so on.Accordingly, teachers should educate, advocate and encourage their students to cultivate comprehensive quality.（181words）

译文：

这幅图能自然而然的联想到网络对学习的影响：年轻人表达了自己对于教育的理解“一旦我学会了如何使用谷歌，难道不意味着我就得到我要的教育吗？”显然，在这位年轻人看来，教育就等于获取信息。

当今社会，很多人上网获取各种信息已成为一种普遍趋势。同时，越来越多人感受到通过网络获取所需知识信息的方便、舒适和高效。生活中，我们能够注意到很多这样的学生和他们喜爱的网站：。。然而，正是网络使得很多学习者未能建立起对教学的正确理解。图片中的小男孩就是一个例子。

作为大学生，我坚信教育不仅意味着获取知识，还意味着学习其他素质，比如科学的方法，乐观的态度和坚强意志力等等。因此，教师应教育、倡导和鼓励学生去培养综合素质。