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冲刺2011年中考英语作文辅导

中考英语作文在整个英语考试中有着举足轻重的地位，作文质量的好与差，得分悬殊很大如何写好英语作文给考生带来了很大的困扰。

思路：

审好题

仔细审查所给的内容提示（包括文字和图表等），明确要求写的内容，确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等，理顺思路，确定主旨。

看要点，写片段

对于易于表达的内容，一次成句；对于一时难于表达的内容，写出词组。此时，既注意不遗漏内容要点，也不要随意添加任何内容。

步骤：

定句型，连词成句

这个环节是成文的关键，一定要注意做到：

（1）选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上，鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了„„”时，可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。

（2）写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。

（3）表达限定的内容有困难时，就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话，用变通的方法，以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话，表达起来似乎很难，但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来：Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.（4）尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”，不可写成：Shesleptvery late.应该写成：Shewent tobed verylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”，不可写成：Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反，表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是：Heisnot a bit worried about his English.或：He isnotworried about his English at all.连词成句，添减相宜

单句写出后，根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。

即：文章的开头（Introduction）、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中，还要注意以下几点：

（1）句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻辑思维方面的问题，这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点，你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。

（2）为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等，表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等，表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等，表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile，while等，表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。>

（3）仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套，给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要，与整个文章浑然一体。

尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。

检查，修改，定稿，誊写

检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下几点：

（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。

（2）体裁格式对不对。

（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

（4）句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。

（5）书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。

经典题例

下面以今年3月中考一模试卷的作文为例，谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项。

原题介绍

目前，扬州正在创建()全国文明城市（NationalCivilizationCity）。作为一个中学生，我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢？我们又如何为这个活动作贡献（makecontributionto）呢？请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文。2011年新经典中考英语作文 关注时事

H1N1流感

★ 范文01.根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

世界上已有许多国家发现了新型H1N1流感病毒（H1N1 flu virus）病例。据了解，人感染该病毒后会出现咳嗽、发烧、疲劳等症状。为了加强同学们的预防意识，（21世纪中学生英语报》正在举办征文活动，请你给该报投稿，描述感染该病毒的症状并谈一谈为了预防该病毒我们该怎么做，最后表达我们能战胜病毒的信心。提示词：cough，have a fever，feel tired，prevent，wash，exercise，sleep，believe

Nowadays，many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus.It’s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough，have a fever and feel tired.To prevent the virus，we can do many things.Firstly，we’d better not go to places where there are many people.Secondly，we need to wash our hands often with soap and water，especially after we cough or sneeze.It‘s also a good habit for us to exercise regularly.It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illne.And having a good sleep is important，too.People who are tired or under stre can get sick easily.And then，eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong.Last but not least，open the window and keep the air in the room fresh.If we all do these things，we will prevent the virus.So there is no need to be worried.I believe we will win through in the end.上海世博会

★ 范文02.上海世博会对中国的影响

As we all know that 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai，this is the first time that China hosted the World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held

该文章转载自无忧考网：http://www.daodoc.come more exciting and attractive and that we can enjoy life to the fullest.Organizers expected to attract 70 million visitors from all over the world to attend，at the same time it is also the largest in the history of World Expo.It is a good chance for China to show its achievements in many fields.玉树地震

★ 范文03.玉树地震

The earthquake in Yushu

An earthquake happened on April 14th in the Yushu county of Qinghai province.There are many people died in this earthquake.When we heard the news，we were all shocked and sad.But when I think of Wenchuan，I believe that people in Yushu are not alone，because we，all the Chinese，will be with them.We should try our best to help people in Yushu.I will take actions to help the people，such as donating money and things they need for them.And we should make friends with homele children and cheer them up.If poible，I want to be a volunteer in Yushu and help them build the new house！I hope that they can overcome the disaster and lead happy lives in their rebuilt home soon.★ 范文04.How to Survive an Earthquake

If earthquake happened，firstly，don’t panic and calm down.Secondly，find some safe place to stay and don‘t run in s uch a hurry.If in the room，one should hide himself/herself under something hard，such as desk，table or even bed and keep away from shelf and cupboard，and never take a lift to go downstairs.If in the open air，find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside.Thirdly，we should help each other when we meet trouble.At last，no matter how strong the earthquake is，if only we have the belief to defeat it and never give up，we must be able to overcome any difficulties.2011年中考英语作文预测及范文 保护环境

从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。

内容包含：

1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋;

2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;

3.离开教室应关灯;

4.最好走路或骑自行车上学;

5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等

注意：

1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数;

2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。

4.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.___________________________________________________

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

参考作文：

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse(再利用)the old textbooks as poible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the clarooms in order to save energy.What‟s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities(日常活动)can make a real difference to(对„有影响)the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

5、.环境问题：

今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。

提示：存在问题: 1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾等。

要求：如何改善/保护环境? 至少:3---4个方面，80字左右的。

范文：

How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting le and le.Some factories is pouring(排出)dirty air into the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster , resources is getting le and le…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.People‟s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle(回收), reduce(减少), reuse(再利用)things.Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as poible.We don’t use plastic bags.We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world will be more an d more beautiful.6、为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。

提示词：

1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it;

2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines;

3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down;

4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources

参考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them,something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.(水是生命之源)No water, no life.(没有水，就没有生命)So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we(我们不仅应该„)protect drinking-water(饮用水)and stop polluting it, but also make full use of(充分利用)it.Save electricity.It is crucial(关键的，至关重要的).We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines(电器)when we finish working.Save forests.They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要。

典型例句：

1.one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数

One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in

WenChuan.2.It“s our duty to do sth

It‟s our duty to help them.3.As….as poible

We shoud help them as much as poible.4.here be„。.Here are lots of things we can do.5.We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.我们要保持冷静而不能害怕。

6.make +sb+ 形容词

It makes many people homele.7.too … to= so … that

They are too young to look after themselves

例文：

1、汶川大地震

2008年5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。

要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80—100字左右;

词汇参考：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感动be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth

参考范文：

On May 12th，a big earthquake happened in Wenchun，Sichuan.Many people lost

their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of

people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them，some people buy

something for them，some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of

soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign

friends also give them a hand.I‟m deeply moved by these people.So I‟ll use my pocket money to buy some

f food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best

to help them to get out of the trouble together.2、雪灾

2008年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？

As we know，our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival.Everything

was covered with heavy snow.It made the buses，trains and planes stop.Millions

of people couldn”t go home.Many people suffered trouble.There was no food，water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against

heavy snow.As a student，I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study

hard at school.We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland

stronger，better and richer.3.甲型HINI流感

从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu），部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。

要点：

一。询问

1.他的健康状况;

2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）;

3.他们是否还上学。

二。建议

1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;

2.勤洗手;讲卫生

3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜;

4.多吃水果蔬菜。

Dear Mike，From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result.I‟m so worried about you.Are you

alright？ Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school？ Do you still have to school

everyday？

To stay away fr om the disease，you’d better stay at home as much as poible

and not go to places where there are many people.Wash your hands more often to

keep them clean;Open the window to have more fresh air in the room;And eat

more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be.Do be at ease！Take care

and you‟ll be OK.Yours truly，Li Hua

中考英语作文范文：健康问题，健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。

健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。

典型例句：

1.It is very important to keep healthy。

2.How can we keep healthy?

3.We can“t go to sleep too late.We can”t get up too late。

4.We should eat the food healthily。

5.We should do more exercise。

6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。

7.I didn“t feel like eating anything。

8.I decided to see the doctor。

9.In the doctor”s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。

10.He said :“Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。

11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful。

12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。

13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。

例文：

1、根据图示，简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥。要求：词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考答案：

All of us want to be healthy.First，we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and le meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don‟t feel well, we should d go to see the doctor at once.2、卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。

(1)保持健康的重要性

(2)保持健康的方法

(3)保持健康的结论

(4)(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯

范文1:

Dear boys and grils :

Here is my advice about how to keep health / fit.As a middle shool student , first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals.Don‟t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn‟t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you,bye!

范文2:

Dear boys and girls:

I’m talking about how to keep health/fit.Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do le exercise, eat more junk food, and they usually do not have enough time to sleep.If we wish to keep fit, my advices are as follow:

Firstly, we must keep taking exercises every day , and eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Secondly, try to sleep for about 8 hours a night, and remember to “early to bed early to rise”.Finally, stay away from cigarettes / smoking/ drugs毒品.Besides(除此之外), don’t forget to breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用)

有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。

参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

范文：

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn‟t delicious.So they often go out of school to buy

something which they like to eat.But I‟m afraid that it‟s bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school, because some of the food they buy isn‟t healthy enough.In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.多彩校园

学校简介

★ 范文13.在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以Proud of My School 请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括学校面貌，你在校的活动，以及你喜欢学校的原因。

提示词：bigsmall，trees，play games，family，be kind to，befeel proud of

Proud of my school

My school is very big with several tall buildings.We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it.There are many flowers everywhere.My busy school life always makes me happy.I have lots of fun at school.I not only have all kinds of claes，but also take part in colorful activities after claes.I play games and do lots of sports，like playing basketball，football and table tennis.I love my school because it‟s like a big family.The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.I„m leaving my school.I‟ll never forget the days I„ve spent here.友情至上

★ 范文14.假设你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。校园网的英语论坛开辟了 “Thank you letter” 专栏。请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信。注意：1.这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢；2.信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受；提示词语：thank you，at the end of，kind，forget，help„ with，stay in touch

Dear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never forget.Last term，I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a w week.When I was worrying about the leons，you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help，I didn’t fall behind others.Since then，we have become very close friends.I think I’ll try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools，I’ll always stay in touch with you.I wish you succe for the future.Yours，Liu Yan

课余活动

★ 范文15.体育锻炼与参加夏令营

Most of us spend one or two hours on sports one week，some do le than one hour.As for me，most of my sports time is for running.Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me.I think it’s neceary for everyone to go out to do sports because it’s good for our health and study.And I’d love to take part in the summer camp.First we’d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better.Next we can visit some museums，places of interest to open our eyes.Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families.I think it’s a good way to understand the different cultures between different countries.I really want to make friends with foreign students because we’re in the same world.At the same time，the activities can help us relax ourselves after the examinations and improve our English.运动会

★ 范文16.一家英文报社正在举办征文活动，请你积极参加。题目是“一次难忘的运动会”。内容要求：你或你的朋友参加了什么项目，结果怎样，感觉如何？提示词语：year，take part in，field event（relay race，high jump，long jump，shot put，excited，take the first prize.This year，I took part in the relay race，I was running the last lap.It was the final event on sports meet.Everyone was paying attention.All the runners got ready at the starting line.As soon as the race began，everyone was too excited to stop cheering.When it was my turn，I could feel the Cla 4’s runner catch up with me.So I try my best to run faster，finally，our cla won the first prize in the most exciting event.I was happy that I won another prize for my cla.This is the most unforgettable sports that I had.毕业感想

★ 范文17.初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。

提示词供参考。three years，memories，one of，one day，think，happy/ sorry

How time flies！I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happine and sadne with you.I had so many memories in three years’ life.On of them impreed me very much.I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then，she has kept helping me.Little by little，I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.