高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第五节）
第1篇：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第五节）
说明(Instructions )与广告（Advertisements）
美文欣赏（Enjoy Reading）
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常用表达法(Useful Expressions)
严格地讲，说明与广告不应该属于同一个范畴，但它们在许多地方又具有密不可分的联系，特别是在描述该物体及阐述其特性时更是如此。所以本文将其合并在一节内容中来学习。
1. 关于物件的描述方法，可参看“描述物体（Describing Things）”一节；
2. 说明的语言应该尽量科学准确，不含糊其词；
3. 广告的语言应该趣味性强，通俗易懂。易于朗读，便于记忆。
写作练习
武汉第三制药厂（Medical Plant）研制了一种新药，药品已被外商订购。制药厂请你为该厂产品写一份说明书，请根据提示完成：
1. 本品为中药，对心脏病疗效显著。
2. 用量：每日三次，一次两粒（pill）;发病时可加服1---2粒。可长期服用。
3. 服药后如感身体不适停服。小孩和孕妇（pregnant,adj.）禁服。
4. 本药品应放在阴凉干燥处。
5. 使用本药品还应严格听从医生的指导。
注意：说明书必须包括以上所有要点，但不要逐条翻译。（约100字）
习作点评
The new medicine is developed by Wuhan No. 3 Medical Plant. It is traditional Chinese medicine and it has good effect on heart diseases. Patients had better take the medicine three times a day, two pills for one time. For a patient who has a heart attack, one or two pills more can be taken. This medicine can be kept for long. If patients feel unwell after taking the pills, do stop taking it . Children and pregnant women are forbidden to take it.
The medicine should be stored in a cool, dry place. About how to take the medicine, the patients should do strictly as the doctor says. 被动句开篇别具匠心
good改为 special更好
应为two pills at once或 at a time
more用得好
以下几句所用语言现象较多且准确，值得初学者借鉴。
参考范文
Wuhan No. 3 Medical Plant has invented a new kind of medicine. It is very good for heart trouble (disease). It should be taken three times a day and two pills once. It can also be taken one or two more pills if needed. This kind of medicine can be used for a long time. It’s dangerous for children and the pregnant. They mustn’t take this medicine. If you are not feeling well after taking the medicine, you should stop taking it. This medicine should be kept in a cool and dry place. It’s better to follow the doctor’s advice before taking it.
第2篇：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第二节）
事件描写（Describing Something That Happened）美文欣赏
It happened to be a beautiful summer afternoon, and Mr. Phillip
was taking a walk in the downtown area of Paris, capital of France.
When he turned to a street corner, he heard the voice of a lovely French singer coming from a nearby restaurant. The sweet music attracted him, so he went into the restaurant to hear it better.
Mr. Phillip sat down quietly at a table near the door. Noticing the waiter come over, he ordered a glass of French wine’
The waiter returned with the glass of wine and put it on the table. Mr. Phillip started drinking the wine slowly and watched the other people in the restaurant.
There were three customers sitting at a table near him. He could tell by their accents that one of them was an American, one an Englishman and the third man was a funny-looking stranger. The polite waiter served each of the three men a glass of beer. By chance, each glass had a fly in it.
Out of curiosity(好奇心), Mr. Phillip watched carefully what they were going to do. To his amusement, he found that each of them took quite a different attitude. The American picked up his glass, took a hard look at the fly, and then poured the fly and half of his beer on the floor. The Englishman looked into the glass, noticed the fly and reached for a spoon, with which he took the fly out of the beer and drank the rest of it. And the stranger noticed the fly in the beer, picked it with his fingers, squeezed(捏紧)it carefully in order to save every drop of the beer, and then drank it up. 这篇228字的短文讲述了一个带有滑稽色彩的小故事，在轻松的一笑之后，我们还应该看到它具有典型的“事件描写”特征:
Who--Mr. Phillip and the other three;
When---a beautiful summer afternoon; Where---a restaurant in Paris;
What---something funny;
How---Mr. Phillip watched the three drinking beer.
其次，我们应该注意短文中用了基本上不重复的34个动词和8个非谓语动词，使得整个事件动静结合，可读性强。
同时，作者在描述三人对同一事件的处理上也各有不同，颇有民族特色。
另外，短文的结尾干净利落，出乎意料，令人忍俊不禁的同时又很想知道：第三人是哪国人？
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常用表达法
1. 写作技巧
1）叙述完整5个W（5 Ws）:
Who, What, When, Where, How,(Why)
2）描写生动3要点（Vivid description）:
Using different verbs;
Using verbs;
Using proper prepositions.
3）写好开头与结尾（A good beginning and a good ending）
A good beginning---引人入胜
A good ending ---回味良久4）时态语态要贴切（Good tenses and proper voices）
2. 表达技巧
1)用好过渡词，使文章前后连贯
(1) 表示时间过程的：
now, then, afterwards, five minutes later, soon, before long, after supper, to this day, just now, just then
（2）表示前因后果的：
because, because of, since, thanks to, so, as a result, thus ,therefore, luckily, unfortunately
（3）表示同等并列的：
and, also, as well as, and then
（4）表示解释说明的：
that is to say, for example, and so on, such as, according to, for this reason
2)把握两个原则，用好不同时态
（1）“一致”的原则：在同一时段中的动作、状态等应该用同一种时态，形成一种并列结构。
误：He had gone to the market, buys some flowers and then returned home.
正：He went to the market, bought some flowers and then returned home.
误：He will go abroad after he finishes his high school education and studies there until he gets his doctor’s degree.
正：He will go abroad after he finishes his high school education and (will) study there until he gets his doctor’s degree.
（2）“呼应”的原则：在同一句话中或在同一段文段中，一般不能产生时态的“跳跃”，应形成一种呼应状态。
误：He said he has been there for three days and he will leave the next day.
正：He said he had been there for three days and he would leave the next day.
规则一：和一般过去时“呼应”的时态应该是过去完成时、过去将来时或过去进行时。
误：He has lived in this old house since he had been a child and he would move into a new house soon. He works in an office not far from his new house.
正：He has lived (has been living)in this old house since he was a child and he will move into a new house soon. He works in an office not far from his new house.
规则二：和现在完成（进行）时“呼应”的时态不应该是过去完成时或过去将来时，反之亦然。
写作练习
(NMET98)五月三日，你参观了一个农场，请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
注意：1.日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；
2.词数100左右。
习作点评
May 3rd suny
It’s a lovely day today! The students of our school visited the Red Star farm.
In the morning, we get together at the gate of the No.1 Middle School, then full of happy, we were singing and laughing on our way to the farm.
We walked and arrived at the farm nearly at noon, there we received a warm welcome. After that, the farmers guided us to see many kinds of vegetables, telling us a lot of knowledge about those plants, asking us to taste some fresh fruites.In the middle of the day, we had a picnic on the farm, talking with each other. Then we held a small party, singing and dancing with the beautiful music.
Time also flies quickly, we had to say goodbye to the farmers. Twilight was falling as we returned to our school.
Night is coming, I am still excited about the visit today, washing to have a second chance to visit the farm again.
日记格式；suny应为Sunny
farm也应大写为Farm
记述过去，应为got
on our way 改为all the way更好
telling 与asking用得好
with 应为to
also多余
结尾较好。但有两处不妥：1.washing似为wishing之误 ；2.a second chance与 again意义重复。
参考范文
May 3 Sunday Fine
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well! At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sun-shine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
第3篇：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第四节）
描述物体（Describing Things）
美文欣赏（Enjoy Reading）
General Sherman
You are looking at the biggest tree in the world. Its name is “General Sherman”. General Sherman is growing on the slopes of the Rocky Mountains in the United States. General Sherman is about 11 metres across and about 35 metres round. During playtime join hands with 25 of your friends and make a circle. This will give you an idea of General Sherman’s size. General Sherman is also very tall.
第4篇：高考书面表达专练（共十四节--第三节）
人物介绍（Introducing Somebody）
美文欣赏
Although Princeton, New Jersey, has a world-famous university, it is still a small quiet town. It is not a place where anyone would expect to see strange characters on the street. That is why one woman will never forget the day in 1940 when, as a child, she suddenly saw a funny-looking man coming towards her. “I remember,” she tells her children now, “how wild his white hair looked---as if it had been electrified. He
