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第七届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登
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With the development of computers, more and more people are working with computers.But, we know that computers are harmful as well as useful and helpful.Here, you are asked to write an eay on the topic “The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers”.You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion.Your eay should be written in English with no le than 300 words within 60 minutes.The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers
李彦妮
辽宁市鞍山市第一中学10届14班
Nowadays, the idea of progre loorns so large in the modern world, and the progre of a particular kind is actually taking place around us.In this circumstances, computers which have a great help come out with the wisdom and hard-working of human beings.It do have given human a tremendous help, it, however, has brought to us its harmne at the some time.The computers can make a great help for us in this high speed society.In the light of this statement, it is computers that can store documents for us which is eential for us, it is computers that can shorten the time in seeking useful information instead of looking for knowledge from a large sums of books and it is computers that can make it poible to comunicate with different people who are far away from you.In a word, we can't live nomally without computers in such a high-tech society.On the contary, having helped us a lot, computers are harmful to people at the same time, especially the adolescents.First of all, sitting in front of the computer may do harm to our eyes.On the other hand, computers not only bring us useful information but also entertainments.Being weak in controlling themselves, those poor adolescents are more easier to get crazy about the fantasy world.Seeing a vivid picture which is about a son who gets stuck in computers and phones to his parents downstairs to bring dinner for him.I realized deeply that the computers really have their disadvantages.According to the statements above, it can not be superficial to simply say that computers are good or bad for us as every coin has both sides.Personally, I still consider that a computer can bring us convinience and high speed which is extolled to all the people even though it is a two-edged weapon.We can learn well punctuated by those purchasable wells of wisdomtechnology.建议该生平时多阅读英语议论文章，观察并模仿规范议论文的文章结构设计，尽量使自己以后的文章做到结构清晰明了。
专家点评：
本文词汇运用较为准确，高级；句型句式较为丰富；议论语言较有力度。但是，文章段落结构出现了较大的问题：引言段，文章主体以及为支持“计算机优势观点”所举的例子都以平行结构出现在了不同段落中，而文章关于“计算机劣势观点”所举的例子却和其相应的观点挤在一个段落中。所以容易给人杂乱无章的感觉。
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