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第七届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登
复赛试题： Directions: With the development of computers, more and more people are working with computers.But, we know that computers are harmful as well as useful and helpful.Here, you are asked to write an eay on the topic “The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers”.You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion.Your eay should be written in English with no le than 300 words within 60 minutes.The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers 李彦妮
辽宁市鞍山市第一中学10届14班
Nowadays, the idea of progre loorns so large in the modern world, and the progre of a particular kind is actually taking place around us.In this circumstances, computers which have a great help come out with the wisdom and hard-working of human beings.It do have given human a tremendous help, it, however, has brought to us its harmne at the some time.The computers can make a great help for us in this high speed society.In the light of this statement, it is computers that can store documents for us which is eential for us, it is computers that can shorten the time in seeking useful information instead of looking for knowledge from a large sums of books and it is computers that can make it poible to comunicate with different people who are far away from you.In a word, we can't live nomally without computers in such a high-tech society.On the contary, having helped us a lot, computers are harmful to people at the same time, especially the adolescents.First of all, sitting in front of the computer may do harm to our eyes.On the other hand, computers not only bring us useful information but also entertainments.Being weak in controlling themselves, those poor adolescents are more easier to get crazy about the fantasy world.Seeing a vivid picture which is about a son who gets stuck in computers and phones to his parents downstairs to bring dinner for him.I realized deeply that the computers really have their disadvantages.According to the statements above, it can not be superficial to simply say that computers are good or bad for us as every coin has both sides.Personally, I still consider that a computer can bring us convinience and high speed which is extolled to all the people even though it is a two-edged weapon.We can learn well punctuated by those purchasable wells of wisdomsmile deeply from one's heart, in the whole world.It is a great chance for all members getting closer to each other in communities by taking part in volunteer work.Their team spirits, their co-operation will be great improued.So, why not? The most importantly, for the whole world, for the entire human race, volunteer work will make earth a better place to live in, it is through volunteer work that we know there are so many people are willing to help others although they can't get money from it.It is through volunteer work that we know we are all brothers and sisters, that we are all families.My dear grandfather, canre on!Join us and help introduce owr great Chinese culture to the world.21 centuring is on open cewtury.You can trust yourself and please trust us, too!We'll help you and we need you help!Let's make the world a better place by being a volunteer!It's a small step for us but it is a leurge one for the whole world!Love you.Your granddaught.专家建议：
句子之间的衔接做的还不是很到位，建议多练练关联词的用法。词汇不够丰富，句型变化不多，建议多看些范文，多练一些经典句型。
专家点评：
文章立意很好，整体结构清晰，语言大体流畅，还能够引经据典，显示出有一定的 文化底蕴。
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